Poem by: Caedes
Submitted: November 26, 2009
Why can't i breath
Why can't i sleep
My heart set in stone
I can't feel a thing
So open my eyes
Set my soul free
Let me fly open winged
Above the tallest tree.
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yeah sorry about that i can't spell lol ;P thanks for the comment tho
Cheers becky xx
Nice poem has spelling error but well done
Well never said i was a good speller thats what editors are for xD anyway glad you liked it :D
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I think we all want to be somewhere else. You did a great job on this barring the spelling error. Really lovely write. Susan :)
Yeah i realised as soon as the first comment was left i felt horrible considering that i copied it from the original lol thanks tho
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