Winged Freedom.

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A poem i wrote a lil while ago now while texting someone it just came to me i'm still fiddling with it but tell me what you think.

My biggest concern is the last line.

Submitted: November 26, 2009

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Submitted: November 26, 2009

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Winged Freedom

Why can't i breath

Why can't i sleep

My heart set in stone

I can't feel a thing

So open my eyes

Set my soul free

Let me fly open winged

Above the tallest tree.


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