Colin's pleasant concussion

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic
Colin, straining for a pair of hard-to-reach coconuts at the top of a tall tree, finds himself dropping through the air. However, instead a nasty fall, Colin finds himself in a rather pleasant place.

Submitted: July 13, 2013

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A pair of coconuts dangled enticingly before Colin's outstretched hand. Clinging to the tall trunk of the tree like a monkey, Colin strained into the empty inches of space between his fingers and lunch. "Just-a-little-more!" Gritting his teeth, Colin pushed away from the tree and snatched hungrily at the coconuts. Before he knew it, Colin found himself falling through the tropical air - the pair of coconuts still firmly attached to the tree.

Colin expected to hit the sand with particularly bone-jarring thump, but instead found himself lying supine on a plump duvet in a large, well-lit room. Looking down at himself, Colin realised he was dressed in a soft, white robe. Rubbing his head, he was surprised to find no bandage. "Wow. I must've been out for some bloody time!" thought Colin, suspecting he'd hit his head rather hard. Colin rolled over and was astonished to find a beautiful young woman in nothing but her modesty staring up at him.

"Good morning your Lordship Colin!" the woman said in syrupy tones. Feeling embarrassingly aroused, Colin attempted to hide his erectness in the folds of his robe. "Er...Who are you and where am I?" asked Colin bewilderdly. "Why, I'm one of your many concubines and you're in the imperial Harem of your Lordship Colin the Majestic, Lordship".  Colin stared dry-mouthed. "My c-concubines?!" he spluttered. "The Imperial Harem of what?!" Giggling, the woman playfully pushed against Colin's chest. "Oh your Lordship, don't jest - you know how it excites me so!" Colin couldn't believe his ears. "I'm sorry, I've never met you before in my life." he replied, astonished. "Then I'll just have to remind your Lordship" said the woman as she swung herself into Colin, straddling him with her naked thighs. Colin watched, entraced as the woman lowered her voluptuous bosoms towards his face. He noticed that her breasts had unnaccountably begun to resemble...

The pair of coconuts landed on Colin's smiling face as he lay  half unconscious on the sand, causing a severe concussion. Later, in hospital, Colin developed complications and soon drifted off into a rather pleasant coma.


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