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Submitted: December 30, 2009
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I indeed liked the landscapes you set up. I am sorry, forthwith that I was so late, perhaps several hundred thousand tendays to this replication of text.
However, you are indeed a good authour perhaps even a great one, I someday wish to have the skills you currently have in your writing arsenal gear
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hahaha thank you very much for your comment. i try hard when im writing although this certain piece angers me some for its illogical fighting scenes sometimes, but it's all part of the process i guess. i actually want to become an author/ novelist so it's very nice to hear such a compliment :) thank you very much for commenting and have a nice day :D
Nice, very nice! You did great dear friend. I see this chapter got the Booksie curse as well. Never mind your story was the best. Are you ending it here? If there is more let me know. Susan :)
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hahahahha thanks susan. and no i am not ending it there. i am writting the next chapter right now actually. thank you very much for all of your comments and i will definitely let you know when i update it which will hopefully be soon. thank you and chow for now :D
Well dear friend I like the story and what is going on, but the format is all squished together. Let me guess you found a typo and Booksie messed it up. Gosh they need to work on that. Well love it so far. Susan :)
Nice intro chapter. You did great with the story. I gave it an I like it. Susan :)
You have a good start, keep me updated. Also, I've just published my second novel "The Amityville Project." If you don't mind, I would like for you to read it and give me your opinion whatever it may be. Thank you and good job.
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thank you for your comment i will be sure to read your novel. thank you and have a nice day. :3
Much better I read this and saw no mistakes. Good job. Also love the story. please keep me updated thanks :D
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thank oyu very much expect more on this story soon i have many ideas for this story.also if you read my stories and have any ideas that you like such as a plot twist please tell me because honestly i have no idea whats going to happen next so feel free to do so. i will keep you updated and thank you again for leaving a comment.
SO suspenseful/action-packed! haha I like it!
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haha thanks for the comment and im going to update this soon so if you like it pleas read more. and i will read your novel soon so expect a comment soon. thanks again!
I love this and please do keep me updated i want to read more but not when im in the dark i get scared easaly sometimes *shivers* i really liked it and i love how you dont need to change anything
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lmao haha thanks for the awesome comic. to be a bit honest i was very worried when posting this because i am not good at action scenes or just the fact of describing them. if you would lie i will continue to update you on when i comeout with a new work. thankyou so much for reading it! :D
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