spaceships

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Book by: Calzzy

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Status: Finished | Genre: Science Fiction | House: Booksie Classic

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In the year 2060,Nasa space agents have been sent to terraform mars into a new planet,suitable for human life since it was evident that the earth would soon be unfit for human life,but what they werent told was that there was the existence of human life on that planet.The astronauts battle to get to earth to spread the news before government agents killed them,but they couldnt make it,its now left in the hands of their teenage kids to find out why their parents died and what message they were trying to get to them...can they????

Science Fiction science fiction adult murder mystery government crime power young planet satellites spaceships

Chapter 1 (ver.1)

spaceships

Submitted: March 01, 2013

Chapter 2 (ver.1)

Submitted: March 14, 2013

\"Then sings my soul,my saviour God to thee,how great thou art,how great thou art\" everyone sang solemnly at the funeral service organis... Read Chapter

Chapter 3 (ver.1)

Submitted: April 16, 2013

\"I dont understand,why would they blame my father\"latoya said frantic as they drove to nasa's space station chicago,lucas drove while m... Read Chapter

Chapter 4 (ver.1)

Submitted: July 04, 2013

Latoya hurriedly packed a few clothes into her bag,she had to leave the house before her mum returned,she heard her phone buzz and she st... Read Chapter

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N. C. Ferrao

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Wed, April 17th, 2013 11:01pm

Once again great writing :-) do kmu

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Thu, April 18th, 2013 4:31am

Thnks...sorry abt da paragraph stuff buh i dnt wnt it 2 hinder my writing..so...thnks

N. C. Ferrao

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Wed, April 17th, 2013 10:59pm

Its good just as be4.... Da only thing I would say to do s da para spacing... :-)

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Thu, April 18th, 2013 4:18am

Thnk u so mch,wah i explained earlier abt my system still stands i presume

N. C. Ferrao

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Wed, April 17th, 2013 10:57pm

Nice start :-) n it would look better if u could write it in paras.... Overall its a great start :-)

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Thu, April 18th, 2013 4:16am

Thnk u,the paragraph stuff is cos of my system so once im done repairing it,id edit da previous n we'd hv better looking chapters

KCNiemi

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Tue, April 16th, 2013 1:32pm

Ooh, cliff hanger. The plot is good, and the characters are cool. The only improvement I would make is maybe using a grammar check before posting your chapters :)

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Tue, April 16th, 2013 5:06pm

Thank you so much its just dah my system is sorta bad so im using my galaxy tab which isnt so..u knw buh i hope to get my system bck soon,den i'd hv better chapters .but i really didnt wnt a bad system 2 slow dwn my progress

KCNiemi

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Mon, April 15th, 2013 9:06am

I very much enjoyed this! A suggestion though, perhaps spacing the paragraphs to make it easier to read? It might just be me and my dyslexia though :)

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Mon, April 15th, 2013 9:50am

Thank you,da next chapter is on the way id notify you when i carry out the next chapter