My feelings have been secure,
And what you thought was only obscure,
Has proven to be mighty to both of us,
And we have found each other not through seductive lust.
Let's make the best of what we have,
And not leave anyone to be shocked with constant gasps,
We see what we admire most in each other,
And to you I am not just a simple brother.
You are one I would never expect to find,
Our likes and dislikes pratically share a mind,
Down with the Jonas Brothers and up with Killswitch,
Your mind is pure and clean unlike a witch.
Graceful in every way,
Our pressence makes us always want to stay,
Let's make the best of this feeling,
And only be loving human beings.
Submitted: February 27, 2009
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this is really nice, and I like the twist toward the end 'down with the Jonas Brothers'..that is funny, but now really, this is romantic, and there's nothing wrong with love...nice work...the wording flows well :D *m*
Mon, May 4th, 2009 5:30am
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Haha, thanks. I sometimes try to express a different side and attract more people to my stuff other than the "FUCK THE WORLD!" type of thing.
Mon, May 4th, 2009 11:47am
haha down with jonas brothers XD
i liked that but most of all
i really enjoyed reading this poem :)
it was sweet and sincere
very nice work
please keep writing :)
-Tricia
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Thanks!
Sun, May 17th, 2009 2:42pmFacebook Comments
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This is real sweet :) I love the 'Down with the Jonas Brothers and up with the Killswitch" haha...
Fri, February 27th, 2009 3:47amReally nice poem. It was really really really sweet. Enjoyed it lots!
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It's true, man! That is a fact in the poem!
Fri, February 27th, 2009 6:38pm