"Why I'm Scary"

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Part of POEM-A-DAY! SPRING BREAK!

You run in fear when you see me,

And small animals scatter out of their herds when I intrude,

It's not because of my face they flee,

It's what I've done that causes them to run.

This is why I'm scary...

I killed my sister because I was bored,

I pushed my friend off a cliff because he lied to me,

And I pushed an old lady in front of a moving truck.

I threw bricks at passing bikers,

And I kicked a garbage down stairs,

Which had a stray cat in it,

Which hit random bystanders.

This is why I'm scary,

And while all life flees me,

So are you one of the smart ones?

Or are you going to be another victim?


Submitted: April 10, 2009

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viper

Wow.This is really a strange and twisted character.Iliked this one.One can only wonder whether they would be another victim.It puts to mind of No More Mr.Nice Guy by Alice Cooper.

Sat, April 11th, 2009 9:01am

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Heh, a good song, Viper! Yeah, I was trying to get that twisted sense into and I think I nailed it pretty well!

Sat, April 11th, 2009 1:35pm

Cobra Midnight

Haha, I agree with Viper! No More Mr. Nice Guy by Alice Cooper!
And anyways, very evil character indeed! Him and Eddie T. Head could be friends! XD
It was freaky, dark, evil...and awesome!

Wed, April 15th, 2009 2:29am

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Actually him and Jack the Ripper if you wanna get a little Judas Priest in there. XD

Wed, April 15th, 2009 5:29pm

Vamplit

The comments may be short but I'm voting. Very dark, tartly twisted, black as night poem.

Sat, April 18th, 2009 9:16pm

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Oooh, I like "black as night". That's a bloody awesome thing to say!

Sat, April 18th, 2009 3:29pm

tastetheblood

I'd rather not be a victim actually .I'll stay as far away from your evilness thanks.Great poem though I liked it quite a dark evil piece

Thu, April 23rd, 2009 6:09am

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Evilness, eh? MUAHAHAHAAHAHAHA!!!

Thu, April 23rd, 2009 11:47am

cherub666

Wow...this is dark, evil and twisted.
I think I'm not your next victim!That means I'm one of the smart ones Ha Ha Ha!
You've got a great imagination!
Not only this but even your other poems are pretty good:)

Sun, May 17th, 2009 1:27pm

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XD! Thanks! I'm glad to hear people like my poems! Much appreciated!

Sun, May 17th, 2009 6:34am

JenDamsel

ohh my... this guy is creepy, don't want to meet in a dark street nop scary. Great job.
love your work
~Jenn

Sun, May 17th, 2009 11:26pm

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I actually don't think he's that creepy. I barely tried to make "scary" or "creepy". I could have done worse, but I don't want an even greater impression that I'm crazy! XD

Sun, May 17th, 2009 4:28pm

Zayther

I 'Liked it'. Nothing more needs to be said!

Fri, July 17th, 2009 12:43pm

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XD

Thank you!

Fri, July 17th, 2009 1:09pm

Christine Chapman

Strange and twisted indeed... wow. Thanks for the entry!

Sun, July 19th, 2009 4:52pm

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Thanks.

Sun, July 19th, 2009 10:05am

manish

that is quite an unusual one.good work!!!

Tue, July 21st, 2009 12:10pm

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Thank you!

Tue, July 21st, 2009 9:49am

angelv666

Wow!
Amazing…just amazing!
This is really good.
I like it a lot.
I love twisted and crazy things like this.

Wed, July 22nd, 2009 11:50pm

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Then you'll be right at home here! =D

Thu, July 23rd, 2009 6:49am

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