Demon House

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

A very short story about a house ruled by a demon.

The blood dripped down from the floor above, staining the rug and walls, it was the most terrifying yet beautiful thing to watch. It was as if the house was weeping for the tortured souls that had been in the house unable to leave. The demons had won claiming the lives of yet another unsuspecting family, feeding its unending hunger with their souls. The floor had swallowed their dead bodies before the cold could seep into them, leaving their blood to tell the story that would never be heard. The house stood silent, waiting, anticipating even, to pull the next unsuspecting victim in an attempt to satisfy its demon m family, feeding its unending hunger with their souls. The floor had swallowed their dead bodies before the cold could seep into them, leaving their blood to tell the story that would never be heard. The house stood silent, waiting, anticipating even, to pull the next unsuspecting victim in an attempt to satisfy its demon master.


Submitted: June 18, 2013

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Charlotte Miller

Another very descriptive story. I like how nothing is explained it just is. Suggest you indent for paragraphs, it would make your story easier to read. Good job.

Tue, June 18th, 2013 8:01pm

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Thank you and sorry about not indenting I copied and payed it from my google drive and forgot to do the indents.

Tue, June 18th, 2013 5:53pm

Evelina Duile

I like how the house is the threat and serves a demon master. Good story. A couple of lines is repeated towards the end. No biggy!! Another good story from you!

Thu, June 20th, 2013 7:23am

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Thank you thanks for reading it.

Thu, June 20th, 2013 6:24pm

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