An Orchestrated Dream

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He's
gliding
handsomely
on pristine bays

Submitted: November 30, 2007

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Submitted: November 30, 2007

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An Orchestrated Dream
He's
sailing
handsomely
on pristine bays
in my lucid dreams
singing gleefully a song
tempts his pen to come along
rippling of waters
echo his mate
who are not
really
here
~
The
glacier
formations
amidst the bay
masterpiece of time
determined movement sublime
the sun's touch diminishes
those icy wonders
back into it's
beginning
water
form
~
A
dance so
serene starts
upon winds breath
the clouds waltz away
under the moons beaming light
thunder is the tune tonight
the wind settles down
and now clouds drift
with dreams
in the
sky

this is the first complicated form I have trie it was made my http://www.allpoetry.com/ArkBear

if you use give him credit it is called an Arkquain

syllables

Line 1 -1

Line 2-2

Line 3-3

Line4-4

Line5-5

Line7-7

These two lines need to rhyme

Line 8-7

Line 9-5

Line 10-4

Line 11-3

Line 12-2

Line 13-1

Must have three stanza's as well


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