Fly Hunting

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a haiku about a frog.

Fly Hunting
Orange feet grasp the grass
Waits by for a juicy fly
Waits and waits and waits


Submitted: August 17, 2015

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P3anut

I really like the emphasis on the waiting for the fly because it's almost an exaggeration of the seriousness, despite the poem's lighthearted vibe. It's a well-written haiku. Nice job, and keep up the good work.

Tue, August 18th, 2015 12:43am

Kenisha Liyanage

You have exaggerated how the frog waits to for a fly. But it has been put in a nice way. Good job done. But better count the syllables and edit the poem again.

Tue, August 18th, 2015 5:37am

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