Fly Hunting

P3anut

I really like the emphasis on the waiting for the fly because it's almost an exaggeration of the seriousness, despite the poem's lighthearted vibe. It's a well-written haiku. Nice job, and keep up the good work.

Kenisha Liyanage

You have exaggerated how the frog waits to for a fly. But it has been put in a nice way. Good job done. But better count the syllables and edit the poem again.