but , un needed

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic
A poem i have written,
please comment any type of criticism. I can take it.
Please do not copyright.

Submitted: October 05, 2009

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Submitted: October 05, 2009

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makes your body older,

than it wants to be,

it carrys you,

although you do not wish to be carried,

takes your last breath, knowing you have much more breaths to take.

stops your last step, thou your walk hasnt ended,

for the last time, beats your heart, thou your heart can beat much more.


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