*A Wonderful Moment*

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

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The sunset,

I would love to see.

It gives me that awesome feeling like being free.

It refreshes my mind &

makes me feel like everything is going to be fine.

I wish this moment,

I could repeat.

So this wonderful feeling I can keep.

But, I know that there will be more.

Wonderful moments like this,

as I open another door.

I feel like this is a new wonderful start.

I can feel it in my heart.

I just pray that this wont ever fall apart.

I dont ever again wanna get lost in the dark.

I wanna be in this moment forever

& always.

Right here, is where I wanna forever stay

in this wonderful moment,

Night & Day.


Submitted: October 13, 2012

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iloveuall

I like your poem. I also loved how you rhymed the ends.

Sat, October 13th, 2012 6:21pm

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Thank you so much! Im glad you liked it.(:

Sat, October 13th, 2012 11:24am

kimmysweetie08

This one's great :) I love watching sunset. I usually go in our rooftop and spend my time watching the beautiful sun set down. And yes, it gives you a refreshing feeling and makes you feel like you're on top of the world. LOL :) I love how you expressed your feelings in this poem. Great job! I would love to read more of your works. :)

Sun, October 14th, 2012 5:14pm

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Lol. Awe, thank you so much. Im glad you liked it.(: & yes it really is a great feeling.

Sun, October 14th, 2012 5:25pm

angel plant

I love it also. amazing and beautiful. well written and good detail.

Mon, October 15th, 2012 3:55am

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Aww, thanks!(:

Mon, October 15th, 2012 7:34am

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