The sunset,
I would love to see.
It gives me that awesome feeling like being free.
It refreshes my mind &
makes me feel like everything is going to be fine.
I wish this moment,
I could repeat.
So this wonderful feeling I can keep.
But, I know that there will be more.
Wonderful moments like this,
as I open another door.
I feel like this is a new wonderful start.
I can feel it in my heart.
I just pray that this wont ever fall apart.
I dont ever again wanna get lost in the dark.
I wanna be in this moment forever
& always.
Right here, is where I wanna forever stay
in this wonderful moment,
Night & Day.
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I like your poem. I also loved how you rhymed the ends.
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Thank you so much! Im glad you liked it.(:
This one's great :) I love watching sunset. I usually go in our rooftop and spend my time watching the beautiful sun set down. And yes, it gives you a refreshing feeling and makes you feel like you're on top of the world. LOL :) I love how you expressed your feelings in this poem. Great job! I would love to read more of your works. :)
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Lol. Awe, thank you so much. Im glad you liked it.(: & yes it really is a great feeling.
I love it also. amazing and beautiful. well written and good detail.
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Aww, thanks!(:
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Such a positive poem and sunsets can help that so much, I know it! I like this poem loads.
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Thank you(:
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