The sunset,
I would love to see.
It gives me that awesome feeling like being free.
It refreshes my mind &
makes me feel like everything is going to be fine.
I wish this moment,
I could repeat.
So this wonderful feeling I can keep.
But, I know that there will be more.
Wonderful moments like this,
as I open another door.
I feel like this is a new wonderful start.
I can feel it in my heart.
I just pray that this wont ever fall apart.
I dont ever again wanna get lost in the dark.
I wanna be in this moment forever
& always.
Right here, is where I wanna forever stay
in this wonderful moment,
Night & Day.
Submitted: October 13, 2012
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Comments
This one's great :) I love watching sunset. I usually go in our rooftop and spend my time watching the beautiful sun set down. And yes, it gives you a refreshing feeling and makes you feel like you're on top of the world. LOL :) I love how you expressed your feelings in this poem. Great job! I would love to read more of your works. :)
Sun, October 14th, 2012 5:14pmI love it also. amazing and beautiful. well written and good detail.
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iloveuall
I like your poem. I also loved how you rhymed the ends.
Sat, October 13th, 2012 6:21pmAuthor
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Thank you so much! Im glad you liked it.(:
Sat, October 13th, 2012 11:24am