Fear of not being loved
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Poem by: Carlee
All I want is to be hold,
on this lonely night thats so cold.
But, instead I lay here alone, lost, confused, at home.
I just wanna be loved, I pray one day god will send me that from up above.
I want someone to love me, but here I lay stuck in misery. I shed so many tears,
not finding love is what I deeply fear.
Being alone in the dark, is causing me to fall apart.
Im on a path that I cant escape, stuck in this miserable life, I hate.
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"Lost, confused, at home" Genius!
This one is really good. ;) ^^
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Thank you!(:
I feel the emotions in this, you did an awesome job with this. Keep at it :)
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Thank you!
I love it! DEFINITLEY one of my favorites of all your writing. I think it's because of how dead on and accurate you were with these emotions that are hard to describe. I was totally able to feel it.
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Awe, thanks. It means alot that you are keeping up with my work. I really appreciate it.
Short but effective :) like it :D
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Thank you!
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