*Looking Down*

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Keep your head up & dont let anything put you down.

Looking Down, not hearing a sound.

Looking down, wishing you could be found.

Loooking down, hopeing, praying taht you'll find your way.

Trying to find something to look forward to everyday.

Looking down, is where life can get you.

But, if you start looking up

you will get through.

Dont spend all your life looking down, because you wont see al the great things thats all

around.

Dont look down, feeling so low.

Always look up, to the wonderful things that will show.


Submitted: October 11, 2012

© Copyright 2022 Carlee. All rights reserved.

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adremra

very nice, hope you keep going for a long time :)

Thu, October 11th, 2012 9:06pm

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Thank you. I hope you will continue stopping by to check out my stuff. I have new poems on the way.(:

Thu, October 11th, 2012 2:11pm

kimmysweetie08

I love it. It's so uplifting! I love your poems so far... Good job! :)

Fri, October 12th, 2012 3:30am

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Awe thanks!(:

Fri, October 12th, 2012 1:12pm

LightFeather09

Nice :D I will stop looking down ;) good job :D

Fri, October 12th, 2012 3:46am

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Thanks!(:

Fri, October 12th, 2012 1:13pm

Ava Rosien

I like this poem more than any of the rest you've written because it is more positive and up beat.

Keep that going! Good job.

Fri, October 12th, 2012 3:55am

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Thank you!(:

Fri, October 12th, 2012 1:15pm

Drizzy

very very good poem;)

Mon, October 22nd, 2012 5:42pm

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Thank you(:

Mon, October 22nd, 2012 10:44am

mariannamonstaa

Love your work Carlee! Thank you for the continued praise

Thu, May 3rd, 2018 10:48pm

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