*These Drugs*

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

My bones are aching, bending & breaking.

My bones are aching,bending & breaking.

Ive lost control, lost

all hope, & taken these pills is how I cope.

I dont know what else to turn to

but this is all I know to do.

I hate that im losing myself,

everyone around try to help but I dont want it.

Because I cant be saved,

im far too gone away.

There is no more hope for me.

These drugs have got the best of me.

They have made me to be,

this other person thats become everyones enemy.

Ive lost all faith & everywhere

I go, I dont feel safe.

Ive gotten so skinny that I became

very sickly.

Im looking really pale & im not feeling too well.

& everyone that I know can tell.

I know everything im doing is wrong

& I know you want me to get through this &

to be strong.

But, I dont know if I can do it anymore,

I barely can get myself up off the floor.

I will do the best I can to get better,


pray that this pain will go away




Submitted: October 15, 2012

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Nice work, i look up to this. when and if you can please look at my work and guide me

Tue, October 16th, 2012 5:43am


Thank you! & I sure will!(:

Tue, October 16th, 2012 8:06am


I feel bad for this narrator x( She seems so weak and sad...but I love how you wrote it! Please accept my fan request :)

Tue, October 16th, 2012 5:40pm


Thank you! & I accepted((:

Tue, October 16th, 2012 10:46am


great work, very sad though, i know a lot of friends like that

Thu, October 25th, 2012 10:57pm


Yes it is. I went through it for awhile. & thank you.

Sat, October 27th, 2012 4:03pm

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