the killer clown ( re done)

Short Story by: carlette

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this story is about four girls who go away on a vacation to a cabin for a week but while there are there they run into some trouble with a killer clown and they saw something they were not supposed to see and then the killer clown starts to go after them to kill them and they have to fight to save their selfs and eachother

it is a beautiful summer night and four girls Emily Shailene Tracy Ashley are hanging out at a lake cabin for a week

Emily: this place is awesome how did you find it

Ashley: i found it on this website and it was pretty cheap

Tracy: well that is good so since it is dark outside and we can’t do anything outside do you want to watch a movie

Emily: yes and i have the perfect movie for us to watch

Tracy: what is it

Emily: we can watch Jason

Ashley: again what is it with you and these Jason movies

Emily: i love how the guy just pops out of places and scares you and then kills people

Ashley: ok we can watch it but next time can i pick the movie

Emily: sure now can you turn the lights off it is better to watch it in the dark

Ashley: sure.

Ashley turns the lights off and the girls sit down and watch the movie then two hours later Ashley has to use the bathroom

Ashley: i have to use the bathroom i will be right back.

Ashley goes upstairs she walks past the window and she sees a guy across the lake walking around in a clown suit Ashley runs down stairs and tells the girls

Ashley: guys look outside hurry

Emily: why whats wrong

Ashley: there is a guy walking around in a clown suit across the lake at the other lake cabin over there and he was holding a dead body

Tracy: Ashley is this some kind of joke are you trying to scare us

Ashley: no why would i joke about something like that just keep looking out the window.

the girls keep looking out the window and they all see the guy in the clown suit this time and they see him picking up another body and take it back in the cabin

Ashley: see i told you i was not joking

Emily: well what do we do

Ashley: we should not do anything we should call the police and let them take care of it because it is not our problem

Emily: well i am going to go check it out because what if those people are not dead what if they are just knocked out they could still be alive i am going over there and checking it out

Ashley: Emily that is a stupid idea

shailene: i will go with you

Tracy: so will i Ashley you can come or you can stay here by your self

Ashley: fine i will go but i am telling you this is not going to end well.

Emily shailene Tracy Ashley go outside and start to walk over to the other lake cabin then the guy in the clown suit walks out of the cabin and sees the girls he stands there and looks at them and then he starts doing a creepy dance

Emily: what the freak is he doing

shailene: i have no idea but that is creepy

Ashley: that's why i hate clowns ok i told you from the start this was a bad idea

Tracy: lets just go back inside and just act like we didnt even see him

Ashley: he knows we saw him that is not going to work

Tracy: just start walking back inside.

the girls start to walk backward so they can keep there eyes on the guy in the clown suit then the guy in the clown suit starts running towards them Emily shailene Tracy Ashley run in the house and lock the door

Emily: what do we do

Ashley: run upstairs and hide

Emily shailene Tracy Ashley run up the stairs run in a bedroom and hide in the closet the guy in the clown suit kicks the door down and skips in the house and looks for the girls he looks in the kitchen and in the living room but he does not find them so he walks up the stairs and starts looking for them he looks in the bathroom and does not find them then he sees a bedroom door cracked open and walks in and starts looking he looks under the bed and behind the door and does not find them but then he sees the closet he skips towards the closet door and looks at it then he opens it then Emily kicks him in the face and he falls on the ground Emily shailene Tracy Ashley run out of the room and down the stairs and out the font door and into Stallone's car and she drives off fast.

the guy in the clown suit gets off the ground and runs down the stairs and out the door and sees the girls are getting away in the car so he runs to the lake runs and jumps into the lake and swims fast to the other side back to the other side of the lake and runs into the middle of the road and stands there shailene does not see him in time

Tracy: WATCH OUT.

shailene swerves off the road and into the ditch and get knocked out the guy in the clown suit walks over to the car and pulls them out of the car and ties ropes around their ankles and drags them into his cabin and tie them up in chairs and keep them in the basement the girls are knocked out for an hour then they wake up.

Emily: where are we

Ashley: we are in his cabin in the basement he is probably going to do the same thing he did to those girls

Emily: don't think like that ok we are going to get out of here

Ashley: how

Emily: we just have to get out of these ropes

Ashley: they are too tight there is no way we are getting out of these ropes

shailene: i untied my self

Emily: how did you get out of those ropes

shailene: it was easy

Tracy: ok now get us out.

shailene unties Emily Tracy and Ashley then the guy in the clown suit walks back into the basement and sees the girls have escaped.

guy in clown suit: come out where ever you are slappy wants to play.

the girls stay in there hiding spot until slappy leaves he leaves two minutes later

Emily: that was close

Ashley: his name is slappy that is the perfect name for a killer clown

shailene: Ashley calm down he is going to hear you and come back down here

Ashley: how can you calm down at a time like this there is killer clown named slappy and he is going to kill us if we don't get out of here

shailene: ok we are going to get out of here just follow me.

Emily shailene Tracy Ashley open the basement door and walk out slowly they look around and start to walk to the front door but there are locks on there that need a key

Ashley: what do we do now

shailene: i think i saw a back door when we came out of the basement lets try that door its the only chance we have.

Emily's shailene Tracy Ashley start to walk to the back door but there is room they have to get by and slappy is in that room

shailene: we have to crawl by slowly and quietly

Emily: i will go first.

Emily crawls by the door first and she makes it Tracy goes next then shailene goes now it is Ashley's turn but Ashley does not go shailene waves at Ashley telling to crawl over but she still sits there shailene waves at her again Ashley finally crawls over but not in time slappy opens the door and sees Ashley kicks her in the stomach then that's when shailene comes up behind him and hits him in the head with a glass vase and he gets knocked out and the girls escape and go back to their lake cabin

Ashley: ok tell me why it was a good idea to come back over to where he can still find us

shailene: well we do not have a car so we do not have a choice

Tracy: wait Ashley you said you found this place online right

Ashley: yea why

Tracy: because if you found this place online that means someone must have let you rent this cabin for week which means there could be a car here

shailene: Tracy your brilliant

Emily Shailene Tracy Ashley go to the garage and there is a car in the garage they get in the car and the keys are in Emily starts the car and and they drive away and drive to a police station when they get there an officer sees them right away

officer: ladies what happen

Emily: some guy in a clown tried to kill us but we got away

officer: how did you get away

shailene: i hit him in the head with a glass vase and knocked him out and we ran out the back door and came here

officer: is the guy still there

Emily: as far as we know yes

officer: what is the address

Tracy: 19675 oak street

officer: you guys stay here me and a team of officers will go check it out.

the team of officers leave and go check it out when they get there they don't see slappy just dead bodies they call in a medical team to take care of it the one officer goes back to the police station and tells the girls the news.

Emily: so did you catch him

officer: when we got there we did not see him there was nobody there just two dead bodies nobody in a clown suit

Ashley: that's not possible when we left he was still there

officer: well he is gone I'll tell you what i will have a patrol car sit outside your houses so if he tries to kill you again a cop will already be there but if i were you guys i will stay together tonight just to be safe

Emily: that sounds like a good idea

Ashley: well if we are all staying at her Emily's house then why don't you just send patrol car since we are all going to be at Emily's

officer: ok that will work now you guys get out of here and go home and lock all doors and windows if that guy is out there he will strike any chance he gets.

the girls go back to Emily's house and lock all doors and windows and then they get some dinner

Emily: guys i am really scared what if he tries to get us when we are sleeping at night

Ashley: we will be fine ok now lets eat i am starving.

the girls eat the food they made and while they are eating the lights cut off

Emily: what just happened

Ashley: i have no idea

Emily's phone rings

Emily: it is an unknown number

Ashley: answer it

Emily: why do i have to answer it

Ashley: because it is your phone now answer it

shailene: give it to me i will answer it.

shailene takes the phone out of Emily's hand and answers the phone

shailene: hello who is this

nobody answers

shailene: i said who is this

slappy is on the other line and then he does a creepy laugh and he keeps laughing in the phone and then he hangs it up

shailene: it was the guy in the freaking clown suit

Ashley: slappy

shailene: i don't care about his name

Emily: where did the call come from

shailene: i don't know let me look

shailene looks and see’s where the call came from

shailene: oh my god

Ashley: what

shailene: it came from my house

Emily: are you sure

shailene: yes i am sure guys my mom is there i have to go warn her

Ashley: do you know how dangerous that is it could be a trap

shailene: i don't care that's my mom i am going help her i am pretty sure we all know what he can do and i don't think she can Handel him by herself i am going to help her and you are not stopping me

Emily: ok we will come with you

shailene: ok then lets go.

Emily shailene Tracy Ashley go to shailene’s house when they get there the lights are off and the door is cracked open

Emily: he is already in the house.

then suddenly they hear shailene’s mom scream shailene runs in there Emily Tracy Ashley run after her but they don't see her they looks in the living room and the kitchen but they don't see her they hear her scream again and the scream is coming from up stairs Emily shailene Tracy Ashley run upstairs and they look around they look in the first three rooms but they don't see then they walk in shailene’s room and her mom is tied to the bed and she has been stabbed several times

shailene: oh my god mom

shailene’s mom: shailene its a trap get back

shailene: i know it a trap but i am not leaving you here now come on

shailene’s mom: SHAILENE WATCH OUT

slappy run out of the closet and towards shailene with a knife in his hand shailene ducks out of the way and slappy misses her slappy goes for her again and he still misses shailene gets her mom and starts to run downstairs Emily shailene Tracy Ashley follow behind them slappy skips down the stairs after them they run out into the car and drive off slappy runs out the door and throws a knife at the car tire and the girls swerve but shailene gets the car under control and she drives off

Emily: where do we go now

shailene: we can go to my parents beach house he should not be able to find us there

Tracy: what are we going to do with a flat tire and we don't have a spare

shailene: there is a car at the beach house if we need it we can take it but right now we have to get my mom to a hospital before she bleeds to death.

shailene drives her mom to a hospital and the doctors take her in and shailene leaves and goes to her parents beach house and they are going to stay there for a few days

Emily: do you think he will find us here

shailene: he should not find us here would should be safe here for a few days

Tracy: ok well i am going to go get a shower and then go to bed

shailene: ok.

Tracy goes up stairs and goes in the bathroom when she gets in the shower she turns around to get the soap she looks in the window and she thinks she sees slappy in the window but then when she looks back she does not see anything so she finishes her shower and then goes to bed meanwhile downstairs Emily shailene and Ashley are watching tv then a few hours later they fall asleep its 12:00 at night and they are sound asleep and some how slappy finds the beach house they are staying at he walks up to the beach house and looks inside the window and sees Emily shailene Ashley sleeping he does not see Tracy so he walks around the house trying to find another door but he does not find one so he goes back to the front door picks the lock shuts the door quietly and hides in the house until morning.

Next morning the girls wake up and get some breakfast and slappy is still hiding in the house

Emily: so what are we going to do today

shailene: we can go for a boat ride

Tracy: yea i could go for a boat ride

shailene: cool lets go.

Emily shailene Tracy Ashley finish their breakfast and then they go outside and get on the boat then slappy comes out of the closet and watches them ride on the boat for a few minutes then he takes his phone out and starts taking pictures of the inside of the house a few hours later he is done and the girls are done with their boat ride and go back in the house and get warm clothes on and makes some hot chocolate because it was cold outside once they get their hot chocolate they sit down and watch a movie and slappy is still in the closet while the girls are watching the movie he watches them from the closet and then does his creepy laugh.

Emily: did you guys hear that

shailene: hear what

Emily: i thought i heard something come from the closet

Ashley: Emily we didn't hear anything

Emily: i could have sworn i heard something from the closet

shailene: i am sure it was nothing

Emily: yea maybe your right.

the girls continue watching the movie then slappy takes out his phone and send the girls a picture of the living room in the beach the girls get the text a few seconds later.

shailene: guys this is a picture of the living room that someone just sent to us

Ashley: who sent it

Emily: it says unknown

Tracy: you don't think it is

Emily: no there is no way he knows we are here.

slappy sticks his arm out of the closet and takes a picture of them and then sends it to the girls they get the text a few seconds later .

Emily: this is a picture of us and it was just taken someone is in this house watching us but where are they

shailene: you can tell from where the picture was taken if you look at it carefully.

the girls look at the picture carefully and they find out where the picture was taken.

shailene: it was taken from the closet

Emily: i told you i heard something in the closet i knew i was not hearing things

Ashley: ok you were right

Emily: i am going to go open it

Ashley: no don't open it don't you see this in movies nothing good ever comes from opening the closet door

Emily: Ashley calm down.

Emily walks towards the closet and puts her hand on the Handel and opens it really fast and slappy pops up in her face Emily screams and falls back on the floor slappy walks out of the closet and does his creepy laugh Emily crawls back in the living room and gets off the floor.

Emily: how the freak did get in here

shailene: he must have picked the lock last night when we were sleeping and hid in the closet

Ashley: i told you nothing good ever comes from opening the closet door

Emily: seriously you are going to rub that in my face right now while there is a killer clown in the freaking house.

Ashley: yes i am because i told you not to open the door and you opens it

Tracy: guys seriously is not the time for that.

slappy starts to skip towards them and then he pulls out the knife and he still skipping towards them and he does his creepy laugh again and still skips towards the girls.

Emily: ok now would be a good time to run

shailene: good idea.

Emily shailene Tracy Ashley run up the stairs and hide in the first bedroom and in the closet.

Ashley: why is it that every time we hide from this guy we always hide in the freaking closet

shailene: because it would be stupid to hide behind the door and under the bed so the closet is the only choice we have

Tracy: guys quiet he is coming.

the girls sit in the closet and then slappy walks into the room and looks behind the door and then under the bed and then he stares at the closet door and then her put his knife and holds it in the air and swings the closet door open and gets ready to stab the girls then Emily kicks him in the face and he falls on the ground and they run out of the room and down the stairs and in the living room slappy gets up and follows them the girls run out the door and slappy runs behind them.

Ashley: what do we do now

shailene: get in the boat

Emily: what is that going to do

shailene: we are going to ride it out of here.

the girls run into the boat and shailene starts the boat and goes to drive away but not in time slappy jumps into the boat and attacks Emily. Slappy and Emily fight on the boat Ashley and Tracy try and help but slappy kicks them and they hit there head and got knocked out Emily and slappy still fight Emily kicks him in the face and then slappy punches her in the face they go back and fourth then they both fall in the water shailene stops the boat and looks in the water but does not see them.

shailene: EMILY WHERE ARE YOU.

Emily does not come back up but Tracy and Ashley wake up

Tracy: where is Emily

shailene: she fell in the water while i was driving

Tracy: how did she fall in

shailene: she was fighting slappy

Ashley: is she still down there

shailene: yes.

Ashley gets up runs and jumps into the water and goes after Emily she is under water for a few minutes then she comes back up with Emily.

shailene: thank god you both are ok where is slappy

Ashley: we don't know i went down there to get her but i did not see him

shailene: well lets get out of here before he comes back.

Emily shailene Tracy Ashley go back to the beach house and shailene checks Emily out to make sure she does not have a concussion.

shailene: your going to be ok

Emily: guys there is something you should know

shailene: what is it

Emily: when we were underwater fighting his clown makeup didn't even run off or anything and when makeup gets wet it runs and his did not run

shailene: what are you trying to say

Emily: i am trying to say that its like this clown guy is not human

shailene: come on that sounds crazy and ridiculous

Ashley: it has been in movies ok it could be possible

shailene: did you just hear what you just said you saw it in a movie so that's means its not real.

suddenly slappy comes out of the water and runs up to the house.

Tracy: guys he is back

Emily: seriously

Tracy: yes.

shailene goes in the desk in the living room and gets a gun out of the desk and puts some bullets in the gun

Emily: where did you get a gun

shailene: it is my dads he keeps it for safety reasons now go down the hall and into the garage and close the door its time to finish this.

Emily Tracy Ashley run down the hall and into the garage and close the door slappy runs into the glass door and breaks the glass door and goes towards shailene shailene shoots him twice and he does not fall she shoots him two more times and then he falls to the ground shailene walks towards him and checks to see if he is dead she bends down and checks for a pulse and he does not have one shailene walks away but then slappy gets back up and goes after shailene again but just before he tackled her shailene turns around and shoots him five more times and he does not fall and shailene is out of bullets so shailene runs to the garage.

shailene: get in the car now

Emily: why what happened

shailene: he did not die i shot him nine times and he stood back up like it was nothing

Emily: maybe he was waring a chest protector

shailene: what happened you your he's not human theory

Emily: yea that just sounded dumb and did not make any since

shailene: ok get in the car hurry is he is coming.

the girls get in the car and shailene drives out of the garage slappy kicks the door down and sees the girls leaving so he runs through the ditch and into the middle of the road shailene stops the car.

Tracy: run him over

shailene: what

Tracy: if you want this guy to leave us alone for good then run him over go.

shailene steps on the gas and drives towards slappy she gets closer and closer and then she hits him and keeps driving.

shailene: i cant believe i just ran someone over

Tracy: it was for a good reason.

shailene does not say anything and keeps driving Tracy's house they get there a few hours later.

Tracy: are you guys hungry

shailene: no i am going to get some sleep i am pretty tired

Emily: me too

Ashley: yea i am going to get some sleep too

Tracy: ok well there are some spare bedrooms upstairs.

emily:ok

Emily shailene Ashley go upstairs and get some sleep and Tracy stays down stairs and watches some tv Emily shailene Ashley sleep for a few hours meanwhile slappy is still laying in the road but he is still breathing when shailene ran over him she did not kill him slappy gets up and goes back to his house and turns on the radio and listens to some music and gets some thing to eat then he goes back out and sees what the girls are up too.

meanwhile at Tracy's house the Emily shailene Ashley are finally awake and they all get some dinner.

Emily: its been a few hours since that slappy guy has not messed with us do you really think he is finally dead

Tracy: of course he is shailene hit him with the car we saw blood on the ground he is dead.

suddenly the lights go out.

Emily: what just happened

Tracy: i don't know

shailene: do you have any flashlights

Tracy: yes they are in the desk over there by the lamp.

shailene goes in the desk and gets a flashlight and when she turns it on slappy is standing right there and he has Ashley and is holding a knife to her neck

Emily: oh my god

Tracy: let her go take me instead

slappy: i don't think so want your friend

shailene: oh my god he talks

slappy: i am going to take your friend and you are not going to follow me if you do i will cut her throat and she will die

Emily: she did not do anything just let her go please

slappy: no.

slappy leaves with Ashley and takes him back to his house.

Emily: now what are we going to do he is going to kill her

shailene: we are going to go save her that what we are going to do

Tracy: you hear what he said if we follow him he will kill her

shailene: that's why we have to move quick

Tracy: how are we going to get in without him seeing us and he probably has the doors locked

shailene: i don't know we will figure it out when we get there now lets go.

Emily shailene Tracy leave and go to slappy’s house and they look in the windows and they see Ashley in the basement and slappy is just standing there looking at her with a knife in his hand then he walks away then that's when Emily shailene and Tracy look for a way to get in they try to get in the front door and it is locked they go to the back door and it is locked.

Emily: there is no way in the doors are locked and we don't have anything to pick the locks with

shailene: wait i think there might be a way in

Tracy: where

shailene: do you see that ladder over there that could lead inside the house.

Emily shailene Tracy climb up the ladder and there is a way in and it is not locked and there is a window on the latch and they don't see slappy so they open it shailene climbs in first Emily climbs in next and Tracy climbs in.

Ashley: shailene Tracy Emily i knew you guys would come and save me

shailene: you didn't think we would leave you to die would you

Ashley: no

shailene: now lets get you out of here.

slappy walks into the basement.

slappy: she isn't going anywhere and neither are you

shailene: are you going to stop us

slappy: you will regret asking that question.

slappy runs after them with a knife but the girls duck out of the way of the knife and he misses

shailene: stop you don't have to do this

slappy: yes i do now i am going to give you a second chance to leave and if you don't i am going to kill your friend in front of you then i am going to kill you guys

Emily: i don't think so.

Emily grabs a hammer and hits him in the head with it.

Emily: untie Ashley and get to the roof i will meet you there go.

shailene Tracy untie Ashley and get her to the roof and Emily is still fighting slappy she hits him in the head six more times and he does not die.

Emily: what are you.

Emily runs to the ladder and gets to the roof.

Emily: lets get out of here he just will not die

Ashley: i told you he is not human and you guys would not listen

Emily: right now is not the time for that i thought that for a minute but it sounded crazy but now i am starting to think it is true.

Emily shailene Tracy Ashley leave and go back to Tracy's house and lock the door.

Emily: it wont be long before he comes here and i think i have a way to kill him

shailene: what are you thinking

Emily: we have to cut his head off that is the only way he will die nobody can live without a head

Ashley: where are we going to find a knife big enough and sharp enough to cut his head off

Tracy: my dad actually has a sword in his room

Emily: why does your dad have a sword

Tracy: safety reasons.

Tracy goes in her dads room and gets the sword and goes back down stairs.

Tracy: ok i have the sword now we just have to wait for him to get here

Emily: we don't have to wait he is already here and he is driving a car towards the house and he is not stopping

Ashley: WATCH OUT.

Emily shailene Tracy Ashley run and jump behind the counter and slappy crashes into the house and Tracy dropped the sword when she jumped behind the counter.

Tracy: i dropped the sword by the couch when i jumped over the counter

Emily: are you serious

Tracy: yes

Emily: i will get it.

suddenly slappy gets out the car and starts shooting Emily slides back behind the counter.

Emily: now he has a gun

Tracy: now how are you going to get it

Emily: i will slide on the floor.

Emily starts to slide to the couch and she sees the sword in the middle of the floor by the couch she gets up and leaps to the sword and and slides behind the chair.

Ashley: did she get it

Tracy: yea she got it.

Emily sits behind the chair for a little bit longer and then then slappy stops shooting that's when Emily makes her move she gets up on her knees and looks around the corner of the chair and she does not see him she stands up and starts to walk back over to the counter then slappy starts shooting again Emily leaps behind the counter but she was shot in the ankle.

Emily: i got it now we just have to wait for him to run out of bullets.

the girls wait for slappy to run out of bullets they wait for a few minutes and he finally runs out of bullets and Emily is ready to make her move she gets up and she does not see him she walks out from behind the counter and walks into the middle of the floor and then he jumps out of nowhere and tackles Emily and she drops the sword and slappy starts to bang her head on the floor over and over again.

shailene: she needs help i am going to help her.

shailene runs out from behind the counter and tackles slappy off of Emily shailene and slappy start to fight for a few minutes shailene punches him in the face over and over and bangs his head on the ground over and over then he kicks shailene in the stomach and rolls over on the floor and slappy gets on top of here she puts her hands on his face to keep him from hurting her.

shailene: TRACY GET THE SWORD HURRY.

Tracy gets up and gets the sword and walks over to slappy and stands over him and puts her hands in the air with the sword in her hand.

shailene: CUT HIS HEAD OFF.

Tracy swings her hands down and cuts his head off and now the head is in shailenes hands she looks at his head and then throws it.

shailene: that was close is Emily ok

Tracy: i think so Ashley is checking on her

Ashley: she is ok

Tracy: what do we do with his head and body

shailene: we burry it.

Emily shailene Tracy Ashley get up and grabs slappy’s head and body and buries it in the back yard and after that the girls go to the hospital and get checked out meanwhile at Tracy's house slappy’s body is buried in the ground then suddenly he starts to move when the girls his head with his body it reattached and now he is alive again and he disappears

that is how it ends leaving mystery and suspense.

Submitted: December 06, 2015

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Islebabe

Hey, carlette. This version is so much better. It was easier to read being separated like that. You definitely got the idea, great job. Please let me know when you post new work. I also like to invite you to become a member of the Love Bugs house. We read each others work and offer constructive feedback. Great job and happy writing.

Mon, December 7th, 2015 9:04pm