Alone in a Crowded Room

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

A girl is being hurt by someone close to her. She doesn't know what to do because it feels like nobody is listening to her. She's lonely and scared.

A faint cry
In a crowded room.
Nobody listens,
Nobody cares.
The room gets dark,
You're all alone.
No way out.
He calls your name,
You hide your head,
Hoping to become
I N V I S I B L E.
A tear escapes,
You watch it fall.
Others follow,
Like the rain.
The silence gets louder.
The darkness is
So bright it hurts.
The voice in your mind
Pushing it's way out.
You hear a scream.
The tingle in your throat
Tells you it was yours.
Nobody comes running,
Nobody reaches out.
He whispers
In your ear.
You open your eyes.
All alone
In this crowded room.

Submitted: September 03, 2009

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