Maybe thats why...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

something i wrote when i really wasnt sure but i knew it was right i guess, and yeh this makes no sense but does anything good in the world.


You make me smile like the sun
and fall like the rain,
but the sun rises too high and shines to bright
and the rain nearly always storms.
no one is ever safe.
but maybe thats why i love it so much...
maybe thats why i love you.

Submitted: June 21, 2010

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Hey, I like the contrast between sun and rain, and how they are both extreme. Nice work.

Mon, June 21st, 2010 5:14am

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