A Hidden Love (alternate scene from 'The Pirate')

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Manuela has just discovered her love for Serafin who has been pretending to be the famed pirate, Mack the Black Macoco, in an attempt to woo her. The towns people and Manuela's fiancee, the town's mayer, Don Pedro, think he is holding her hostage in his home and carries out a rescue mission which would end in certain death for Serafin. This alternate scene I've written takes place just before Serafin is captured and after Manuela sings a ballad of love to him.

“Here! Lie down right here!” Manuela said frantically, pulling the injured Serafin over to a couch by the staircase.

Serafin took a seat and laid against the armrest with a goofy smile.

“What are you smiling about?” She asked as she patted his face with a damp cloth.

“Oh, Manuela! Why shouldn’t I be smiling? I’ve just gotten everything I’ve ever hoped for and dreamed of.”

Bringing his hand up to her bare shoulder, he slowly traced his index finger down her chest towards the shallow cleft of her breasts.

“Well, almost everything…” He purred.

Manuela pushed his hand away from her chest.

“Are you mad? Have I hit you too hard over the head? We can’t do that here!”

“I’m not mad… I may be seeing stars but that’s normal for a person who has fallen in love as hard as I have… All I want to do to you is make love to you, Manuela. Right here, right now.”

“Serafin! You fool! There’s no time for that, get your head out of the gutter! We’ve got to get out of here. I heard Don Pedro talking to a few of the towns people outside my bedroom when I was getting ready to come to you. He was bringing the viceroy to capture you and have you killed! He said he would be back within an hour.” She pleaded.

“We haven’t much time left now!” Manuela said as she looked at the clock.

She grabbed Serafin’s wrist, trying to pull him off the couch. He resisted and instead, pulled her back, making her fall on top of him.

“I don’t need much time. Believe me, you won’t need much either once I start with you… Besides, think of the excitement knowing we could be caught at any moment…” He pulled her in closer, pressing his lips against hers.

Manuela fought his kiss and slapped him across the face.

“Owe! Hey, what was that for?!”

“How dare you! You think I want our first time to be nothing but a quickie? A cheap thrill?! You really are a buffoon!”

Manuela broke from his hold and ran towards the door but Serafin got up quicker and beat her to it, stopping her from leaving. 

“I’m sorry, Darling, that’s not what I meant. I was just being silly. Of course I don’t want our first time to be a quickie. That’s the last thing I’d want.” He cradled her cheek in his palm.

Manuela and Serafin stood face to face, so close they were breathing each other’s air. Suddenly, Manuela felt hot. She let a smile escape her lips and Serafin leaned in to kiss them when all of a sudden, they heard Don Pedro and his crew burst through the main entrance. 

“MACOCO! SHOW YOURSELF, YOU FILTHY RUNT!” Don Pedro growled from the other room. 

Serafin took Manuela’s wrist and searched frantically for a place for them to hide. They found an unlocked door near the corner of the room. They got in and closed it. It was the door to the cellar. Serafin motioned for Manuela to go downstairs and hide. He pressed his ear against the door, trying to listen. Don Pedro’s voice became closer. 

“What in Heaven’s name happened in here?!” 

“We must be too late, it looks like they’ve gone.” The Viceroy chimed in.

“They couldn’t have made it far. Let’s go! FIND THEM! NOW!” Don Pedro barked. 

“Are they gone?” Manuela whispered from the bottom of the stairs. 

“I think so…” Serafin turned to her and smiled, making his way downstairs. 

“We’d better stay here a little longer until we’re sure they’ve gone far enough away. Then we can make a break for it.” He suggested. 

He found a lantern on a dusty table. He lit it and brought it over to Manuela who had found a small cot in the corner. 

“We could be in here a while…” She said.

He sat next to her and put his arm around her shoulder, pulling her in to finish the kiss he started before Don Pedro interrupted. 

“You’re right, we very well could be…” He whispered into her mouth. 

Manuela returned his kiss with ardor. Serafin was irresistible, especially in that tight black costume he was in. She leaned in to him, making him fall back on the cot. She adjusted herself, straddling him as they continued kissing. Serafin could feel her kiss becoming hungrier, her body trembling above him. 

She broke from his lips and sat up, she reached her hands down and ripped open his shirt, exposing his beautifully sculpted torso dusted with curly black chest hair. She ran her fingers from his chest down to his strong abdomen, giving him goosebumps. He sat up. Taking her in his arms, he reached his hands up to her hair and pulled out the chain and clip, allowing her long golden red tresses to fall. Part of her hair fell to her side, tickling his arm. He unzipped her dress and pulled the sleeves off her shoulders. It fell to her waist, revealing a plain yet sexy corset. She reached behind to undo the tie at the bottom. She struggled briefly before Serafin reached around her back to help her, loosening each lace. She breathed in deeply and nervously pulled it over her head, revealing herself to him. Serifan gulped hard. She was even more beautiful than he imagined. He stared intently at her gorgeous untouched body. Her delicate porcelain skin glowed beautifully in the warm light of the lantern. He brought his hand up to her shoulder and gently brushed back the hair that had fallen in front of her, covering her left breast. Much like he did when he first kissed her, he grazed the back of his fingers over her erect nipple, making her quiver in anticipation. 

He sat up once more and wrapped his arms around her tightly. He flipped her over, laying her in the spot he was in. He fell on top of her and kissed the side of her neck. Manuela’s sweet smell was intoxicating and made him even more aroused. His hands slid down her bare sides reaching the rest of her dress. She lifted her bottom so he could pull it off. He raised himself up on his elbow, staring at her now nude body. She looked so deliciously vulnerable, his hunger for her became even stronger. He traced his index finger down the middle of her chest, slowing it’s pace as he reached her breasts. He circled her belly button twice before his finger continued it’s journey, stopping at her waist. She shuttered in frustration. 

He smiled, noticing how aroused she was becoming. 

“Good things come to those who wait…” He murmured in response to her silent plea. 

He brought his lips up to her mouth again, nibbling gently on her bottom lip as his fingers continued to explore her torso. His kiss trailed down her chin, then to her neck, then to her chest. He circled her belly button twice more, this time with his tongue. He opened her legs, settling himself between them. Manuela trembled as his moustache tickled the inside of her thigh. 

“Serafin…” She breathed as his kisses trailed closer to her most intimate area. 

Suddenly, she was overcome with the most pleasurable sensation she had ever experienced. She tossed her head back and closed her eyes tight, biting her bottom lip to keep from screaming. She closed her thighs around Serafin’s head as she became more sensitive to his nibbles. She reached down and grabbed his hands, intertwining her fingers with his. She pulled him up and kissed him, tasting herself on his lips. 

“I want you to make love to me.” She whispered against his mouth. She could feel Serafin’s lips shaping into a smile. He got up off the cot and pulled off his pants, releasing his erection. Her eyes widened when she saw him. Nervousness and excitement overcame her. He crawled back on top of her and nudged himself between her thighs. He pressed his lips against her ear and whispered, 

“Are you ready?” 

“Mmhmm” She purred. 

He eased himself into her slowly. She clenched her jaw and closed her eyes, taking every inch of him with both pain and pleasure. She let out a soft cry. 

“Are you alright?” 

“Fine, Darling. Keep going…” She breathed. 

She hugged tightly around him as his thrusts began to pick up. It wasn’t long before they reached their peak together. Serafin grabbed the blanket underneath them and tightened it into his fists as his body shook, releasing his love. Manuela’s climax followed only moments after. He sank his body into her, panting heavily. He rested his head on her glistening chest. She wrapped her arms around him, stroking his hair gently. 

“I am so in love with you, Manuela…” He breathed. 

Suddenly, the door to the cellar flung open and the thunder of Don Pedro's men came roaring down the stairs. 

Submitted: February 03, 2016

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