Good bye

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

I'm going away..good bye

Life seemed unfair, I stood there staring at that dark blue sky, Tears rolling down my cheek, I wished that my days wouldn't go by, Without looking at you, When my heart longed to see what you would say, And to know what you would do, On Knowing that i was going far away from you. Longing to be with you, With atleast a moment in a day to look at your beautiful eyes, Clearing my throat, I came near only to hear you say,'good bye'. Now i am going away, Where your words don't reach, Where your eyes can't see, But still with that same love i remain, Still for your love i crave, Lying today in my grave...!!!


Submitted: November 03, 2014

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Zaineb

you're such an excellent poet,but you're so sad,what's up? noooo don't do it,the most important in your life is you,don't hurt yourself for those who don't deserve your love.

Mon, November 3rd, 2014 3:08pm

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thank you for reading my work. to be frank,i love depicting the moments of loneliness. but thankyou for sharing your comments

Tue, January 20th, 2015 3:33am

APurpleHeart

Love it!

Sun, February 1st, 2015 2:22pm

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thank you for reading purple heart

Sun, February 1st, 2015 4:47pm

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