Do you like Soccer?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A light hearted poem for light hearted moments :)

My dear,
 
With each passing day
My love deepens for you
Then why you accuse Time
Of being inexorable?
True, Time rushes on
Blindly... crushingly
Yet He has no evil intention
Nor enough courage
Even not sufficient strength
To dethrone you from my heart.
 
So tell me, my child
Do you like soccer?
Then enjoy these hurdles
They exist for your kicking pleasure
And to make our bond stronger.
 
 
 
 
 


Submitted: August 25, 2008

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viper

That's pretty good.I liked it.Great job.It's a very touching poem.Keep it up.

Mon, August 25th, 2008 6:44pm

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Thanks :)

Tue, August 26th, 2008 12:09am

devilrod

Very uplifting and hopeful. I like the tone of this. Beautiful Carnation.

Mon, August 25th, 2008 9:58pm

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Thank you so much =)

Tue, August 26th, 2008 12:10am

S.C. Kross

Very warm. :) It's a great poem. Keep writting poems this soft. I think they work nicely with your writting style :)

Mon, August 25th, 2008 10:59pm

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Thank you.. I rarely write happy poems but I'll try =)

Tue, August 26th, 2008 12:11am

dreaming of you

if you like soccer , there's hope for you yet , soccer is a game of sheer joy for so many of us , as was this poem .

Tue, August 26th, 2008 8:27am

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Thank you so much... I like overcoming hurdles and living life in a daring soccer way.

Tue, August 26th, 2008 11:49pm

gerabel

A very pleasant surprise... was expecting something diferent from the title! Nicely done!

Happy days.....Jerry

Tue, August 26th, 2008 11:13am

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ha ha I know... Thank you.

Tue, August 26th, 2008 11:50pm

Classy Peach

I admire the originality to this poem.

Very well done!

Wed, August 27th, 2008 1:15am

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Thanks, i love your comment, for I believe that poetry is nothing if not original/sincere.

Tue, August 26th, 2008 11:52pm

indiefreak

though i'm not quite a soccer-fan, but i've been into many situation where i've witnessed the bonding between the fans of this game:) great poem

Sat, August 30th, 2008 1:36pm

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Thanks!

Thu, October 16th, 2008 5:36am

ScatterBrain

Very nice. I enjoyed this very light poem.

Thank you for sharing,

Hope all is well and take care,

Ted

Thu, September 4th, 2008 2:04pm

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Thanks!

Thu, October 16th, 2008 5:36am

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