Our Last Twilight

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

this is mainly a "Romeo&Juliet" Story.it is sad and romantic. some of my best work.

I stood over him crying.

As my love is dying.

Our love goes down deep.

I can't help but weep.

His heart starts to slow.

His eyes start to go.

I take his hands in to mine.

I wisper to him all is fine.

His lips move but say nothing.

That is when i notice the ring.

It was beautiful and new,

And on the inside was ingraved "I love you".

I listened to his hearts final beats.

And i knew it was a defeat.

His body is covered in blood.

Mine covered in mud.

One unessesary life was lost,

At much too high a cost.

It was not my fault but i saw red.

As i was left for the dead.

I looked at Heavens Gate.

And as if it was all fate,

He ran to me and held me tight,

As we danced in our last twilight.

Submitted: May 24, 2010

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plz comment!

Fri, June 11th, 2010 1:20pm


thats really really really good

Tue, August 16th, 2011 8:44pm



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