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This is a poem i wrote about my boyfriend and i. I have been debating wheter to give it to him for valentines day or not. If you think i should, please leave a comment. I would like to get as many peoples opinions as i can. thanks!

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Submitted: February 13, 2012

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I look into you dark blue eyes

i feel like im about to die

your blonde hair lies in a untidy mop

when i try to fix it you smile and say stop

I feel so safe in your gentle embrace

I feel like i've won love's great race

You hug me gently in your strong arms

you are so full of kindness and charm

you whisper one word "hey"

i look up wondering what you'll say

You suddenly lean down and kiss me

Is this how love feels? it just might be

You pull away and give me a big grin

Oh, how i love the relationship im in

I lean up and kiss you on the cheek

im so h appy my stomach feels weak

You lean close and whisper something in my ear

ONly loud enough that i can hear

What you say is "I love you"

I smile and reply "I love you, to"


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This is a poem i wrote about my boyfriend and i. I have been debating wheter to give it to him for valentines day or not. If you think i should, please leave a comment. I would like to get as many peoples opinions as i can. thanks!

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