Trusting’s nothing,
Fearing something that’s always there,
Submitted: June 25, 2008
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amazing. like angela said your rhyming was great
Fri, June 27th, 2008 5:12am
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thanks:) I totally look forward to your guys' comments:)
Fri, June 27th, 2008 12:03am
wow...sad but it flows well. brings back memories to me. i really enjoyed it though.
Thu, July 3rd, 2008 9:58pm
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I'm glad:)
Thu, July 3rd, 2008 4:49pm
nice poem......rhyming was good.......
Fri, July 4th, 2008 4:59am
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thanks:)
Fri, July 4th, 2008 8:58am
Awsome! Loved the rhymes! kinda sad but great flow!
Thu, July 17th, 2008 2:47am
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thanks:)
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AngelaSteele
I loved it :) Your rhyming is incredible. Something I liked to do in my earlier poems. Not so much anymore. But this... this was just so marvelous. :)
Wed, June 25th, 2008 10:20pmAuthor
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Thanks! :D
Wed, June 25th, 2008 3:25pm