Submitted: June 22, 2008
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like the flow of thoughts and the theme of the poem. keep it up. c",)
Mon, July 14th, 2008 2:09pmGreat stuff! I usually don't like morbid poems but I took a likeing to this one for some reason...great work!
Fri, November 28th, 2008 6:19amdepressing yet some ways uplifting..i guess when we see the truth, we kind of accept it and move on....right? and this is life
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At first it seems to be just a poem about pain, but gradually you realise its actually a tirade against suicide ...atleast thats how I see it. I liked the transition. It is well-written of course.
Thu, June 26th, 2008 5:08amAuthor
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Thanks:)
Thu, June 26th, 2008 12:48am