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depressing as it may be i like it.
the first three verses have a much better flow than the rest of it though.
the fourth verse i think would read better as
“What was that?” wondered the raven
and he perched on the windowsill.
The screech that penetrated all the walls,
the screech that was so shrill,
It ended now but not from free will.
really good though, keep it up
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thanks for the advice!
At first it seems to be just a poem about pain, but gradually you realise its actually a tirade against suicide ...atleast thats how I see it. I liked the transition. It is well-written of course.
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Thanks:)
like the flow of thoughts and the theme of the poem. keep it up. c",)
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:) thank you very much!
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totally love it...you should so use this one for c4k...it's amazing
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r u sure??
Great stuff! I usually don't like morbid poems but I took a likeing to this one for some reason...great work!
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thanks! :)
depressing yet some ways uplifting..i guess when we see the truth, we kind of accept it and move on....right? and this is life
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Yeppers. We need to accept what's what and even sometimes find solace in the things that once bothered us.
Thanks for reading:)
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