Can You Take Me Back?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

feeling when you try to get the person you love back into your life

We started with the most amazing kiss
We were perfect for each other in every aspect
We blinked and then everything we had washed away
I was so stupid for telling you goodbye

Then all too soon you moved on
Then I was left behind in the dust
Then a new person took my place in your life
I ache in the background thinking that used to be us

After all this time I can't get you out of my mind
After all this time I still feel the tug on my heart when I see you
After all this time our spark hasn't faded one bit
I hate to admit it but I still have a thing for you

Can we try again as lovers
Can we not just be friends
Can we try to reopen that door
Because life for me has not been the same without you here

Let's fall back into what we had
Let's go and create more happy memories
Let's live the life we have always planned out
And I promise this time I will hold onto you and never let go.

Submitted: August 12, 2010

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Wow very nice, im in a very similar position. Amaazing work. (:

Thu, August 12th, 2010 10:51pm


thank you!

Fri, August 13th, 2010 2:43am


Wow,wow,wow. This is awesome!!!

Sun, August 22nd, 2010 11:59am



Sun, August 22nd, 2010 11:28pm


Oh my gosh! It's just AWESOME! Love at first read xD

Sun, September 5th, 2010 2:29pm


thank you! glad you loved it!

Sun, September 5th, 2010 8:01am

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