Night Cradle

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

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The dark is nice,

Hides my soul,

Forgives my sins,

Makes me whole.

The dark is comforting,

Soothes my inner being,

Accepts me as the person i am,

Returns my sense of feeling.

Numb throughout the day,

Conflicting emotions fight,

Hope arises inside me,

As day turns into night.

 

 

 


Submitted: March 26, 2007

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Tesseth

Lovely celeron2!

Tue, March 27th, 2007 1:10am

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Thank you tesseth!

Tue, March 27th, 2007 7:54am

EdwardJBradleySr

celeron2:

Well written. Most interesting perspective. Shared by many, I'm sure. The ultimate in solitude. Alone in the dark. Anticipating and welcoming the moment.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Tue, March 27th, 2007 2:18am

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Thank You Mr.Bradley,not exactly sure of where in my head I was when I wrote this actually!Just kind of came out!Thanks for the comments!

Tue, March 27th, 2007 7:57am

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