Soul Guardian

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Soul Guardian

I am writing this because someone lost a life because of dangers in life. I thought of someone, someone could be guarding us.
That is why I created a fiction story to give hope to everyday life because we need to cherish it every single time.


Chapter One: Who am I?


Once upon a time there is a girl named Mariel Mendoza. Her parents enrolled her in a private school that teaches about religious study. Mariel is fifteen years old, slightly thin, tan, and has a long hair. Her parents supported her study by her mother being a vendor and her father as an occacional welder. Mariel has a sibling and her name is Arianne and Arianne is usually just quiet among them two. Mariel is a person who is not fond of lying she says what is on her mind most of the time. There came a time that she and her mother had a fight and her mother called her a black sheep that she took seriously.
Meanwhile in Egypt, an archeologist found a mummy wearing a gold neclace and inside it is a red stone. When the archeologist took it from the mummy, a sudden wind gushed, a white person appeared and then dissapeared. They took it and sent to the laboratory, they found out that the gold neclace is actually pure gold but the red stone is priceless, an ordinary red stone. The archeologist is actually wondering why the mummy is wearing a priceless stone wherein that mummy is a leader. The archeologist and the researcher separated the neclace from the red stone for further study and they've put it inside two different boxes. They shipped the remains found in a private plane. While they are in the plane suddenly the plane system experienced a sudden system disturbance. It seems we have a system issue guys, we might need to throw out some things that are not important system showing we are currently overload said the pilot. The archeologist and the researcher went to the cargo lane. They threw out the items that they think they don't need out of the plane. All of a sudden the archeologist shouted at the researcher. N-no, not that! But the archeologist already had thrown the boxes containing the neclace and the stone. The pilot had noticed that the warning sign already dissapeared. "Everything's alright back to normal flight guys", then the plane went to its destination. The cargo fell in a province, many people rushed and took the items from the cargo box, a girl saw the red stone that rolled in front of her, she took it and sent it home. The girl and her mother made a neclace and inserted the red stone. The red stone made the neclace, shining due to its bright color. The girl then sent it to the nearest market along with other neclace they made, to be sold. After a few hours, someone bought all their neclace and sold it to a church in the city.
One sunday afternoon, Mariel went to the church. She already has the money she saved for almost a year, and wanting to buy her favorite iphone. She planned to buy it after the mass. After the mass, she waited for a jeepney going to the mall suddenly she heard a fight. A guy is shouting at an old lady and threw her neclace she is selling beside the street. You better pay for your debt otherwise, something even worst will happen! then the guy left. The old lady was crying and Mariel helped her to arrange back the neclace she is selling. Thank you said the vendor. How much is your debt, if you dont mind me asking said Mariel. Two hundred thirty dollars, I cant pay him because I am the only parent of my 3 children, I promise to pay him if my sales is good for the day, then the old lady just cried. Oh, I see.. Well you better take care next time ok said Mariel, then just went back and waited for a jeepney going to the mall. After a few minutes a woman rushed to the vendor and said. Maring, Damian went to our place and demanding me, to tell you to pay your debt, he said that he will never stop until you pay your debt, he's really angry. The old lady cried and explained to her friend. Hi? is your name Maring? asked Mariel. Yes answered the vendor. Ahmm.. here is two hundred thirty dollars pay that person before something bad happen, take it. said Mariel. Ahmm No, that's a big amount I can't take it said by the vendor. No, I insist take it said Mariel. The vendor accepted her money and Mariel walked on her way home. Child! Child, good child! wait just a minute said the vendor. I would like to give you this a neclace this is the most beautiful neclace I've got, take it. This came from a very far place. said the vendor. Wow it is indeed preety, thank you said Mariel. When Mariel got home she wore the neclace and looked in the mirror. It is indeed preety said Mariel. The neclace is made of silver and it matches the skin tone of Mariel. The night after while Mariel is sleeping, she was awaken when she heard someone was calling her. Mariel.. Mariel.. Whoa, who are you!? asked Mariel. Me? I am the guardian of the neclace you are wearing he answered Mariel. I can see through you are you a ghost!? said Mariel. She tried to touch it but her hand is just passing through. No, not really but you could say it like that cause I dont have a body he said. What do you want with this neclace, this was just given to me said Mariel. I saw what you did Mariel it is very righteous what you did to the old lady. Well, this neclace came from a very far place to find you Mariel and this neclace would go to a person with a pure heart. I see you are emotional most of the times, You've been called a black sheep..? Well for me you are not, because people do change, people can change if they have the will and dedication to it, he said. Mariel smiled, Oh alright, what's your name? asked Mariel. I dont have a name but you could call me soul g, I'm your guardian angel and I am here to guard you and that neclace from now on ok? he held Mariel's hand and kissed it. W-well at least I dont need to pay for your fare or anything since you are definetely invinsible. And if I tell anyone about you they'll put me on straight jacket. Wait what is this neclace for and why are you guarding it? asked Mariel. When time comes you will definetely know, Now if you dont mind I'll be here by your side from now on ok? said by her soul g.

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Soul Guardian

Submitted: January 28, 2014

Soul Guardian

I am writing this because someone lost a life because of dangers in life. I thought of someone, someone could be guarding us.
That is why I created a fiction story to give hope to everyday life because we need to cherish it every single time.

Chapter One: Who am I?

Now to start my story I am Ms Mariel Mendoza, I grew up as an ordinary person. Someone let's just say open ang ugali sakin
ng mga taong nakikisalamuha sa akin. My parents are a person na hindi naman ganon ka-open sa pagsasalitang mahal nila ko.
Nung bata pa ako isa akong emotional na tao lagi akong madalas pinapagalitan pero for me to realize its for me din naman kung
bakit sila strict sakin. For me to learn why and sometimes I am misunderstood madalas sa nararamdaman ko understandable
since I am a teenager at that time. As I grew up as a teen I studied in a catholic school and the rest was history.
In egypt many years ago an archeologist found a neclace with gold string at nasa gitna ay isang red stone sa isang mummy.
They took it and sent it for checking kung magkano ang maaaring presyo nito. Nang kinuha nila un may parang hangin silang
naramdaman and a white smoke ay umikot at biglang nawala. Nang pinacheck nila ang presyo only the gold is precious sa
neclace but the stone is priceless sabi nito. Dinala sa cargo at sa hiwalay na maliit na box sa eroplano ang kwintas at aksidenteng
nakuha at napunta sa baggage papunta philippines. Ung nakakuha ng kwintas ibinenta ung gold pero ung bato since priceless
ito ibinenta nalang sa vendor na gumagawa ng kwintas. Dahil walang halaga ang bato ginawa niya na lang itong kwintas. Sakto
namang nagsisimba si Ms Mariel Mendoza ng wala ng masyadong tao umalis na ang nagtitinda at aksidenteng nahulog ang kwintas.
Napansin iyon ni Mariel at kanya itong pinulot balak niyang habulin ang tindera pero ito ay nakasakay na ng sasakyan. Pinagmasdan
niya ang kwintas at bigla itong lumiwanag. Nagulat siya at napatingin sa mga tao it seems siya lang ang nakakita ng pagliwanag nun.
Kanya itong isinuot at umuwi. Habang natutulog hatinggabi may tumawag sa kanya, Mariel, Mariel nagising siya at madilim pa ang
silid at siya'y nagulat. Whoa! Sino ka? sabi ni Mariel. Hi, sabi nito ako po ang bantay nyang kwintas na suot mo. Ha? Napulot ko po
to sagot ni Mariel. Uhuh I see sabi nito. You're a ghost! I can see through you? Sabi ni Ms Mendoza. Tinry niyang ilusot ang kamay
nya at sinabi it is a ghost waah bakit? Nananaginip ako. Sumagot it at sinabi I wish that's true Ms Mariel pero No I am here to guard
that neclace. You see when they took it from egypt It came with me. Ha, I see so it's a dream I do know I see ghost pag may nakuha
ako sa camera pero matagal na yun sabi ni Mariel. Now it's either you shut up or they'll think you're crazy sabi nito. Ah uhuh I see
you got a point sabi ni Mariel. I see na lagi kang balisa at madalas emosyonal Ms Mendoza sabi nito. How did you know? I just know
sabi nito then smiled. You're super weird sabi ni Mariel. You dont know what you're talking about when that neclace fall into your hand
let's see whose weird you or me sagot nito. Alright, alright I see so what's your name? I dont have a name huh sabi nito You could call
me Soul Guardian I'm your guardian angel. Ngumiwi lang si Ms Mendoza at sinabing, whatever your already dead. Haha sabi nito but
I'll take care of you and that neclace. Whatever it's mine I found it, You want to take it back? sabi ni Mariel. Her soul g. said No, its
rightfully yours now. I can never leave you as long as you have that neclace. Para saan ba to? tanong ni Mariel. When the time comes
Now If you don't mind I'll be here by your side from now on sabi nito. Oh alright at least you dont eat tipid ka rin sa pamasahe pag
binulgar naman kita they'll definetely put me on straight jacket sabi ni Mariel.
Sa mga taon na kasama ko si Soul g. and me wearing that neclace some weird things happen. Nagkatrabaho ako gabi na ang uwi, Dahil
bago pa lang ako sa trabaho naglalakad ako papunta sa sakayan para makatipid kahit madilim di na pinapansin kahit dis oras na ng gabi.
Unaware may naniniktik na pala sakin. Kasama ko ang katrabaho ko ng bigla kong mapansin, ang katrabaho ko ay biglang tumakbo at
natakot sa 2 lalakeng nasa harapan namin. Lumingon ako sa kanya kung san siya papunta. Ng pagbalik ko ng tingin may 2 icepick
nakatutok sakin at sinasabihan akong ilabas ang aking celphone. Malapit talaga sa tiyan ko ang icepick nila kaya pinilit kong kuhanin
ang aking celphone sa ilalim pa ng bag ko habang naiyak tawag ng tawag ang pangalan ng tumakbo kong ktrabaho at iniisip ko that time
na katapusan na. Ang 2 holdaper sinasabi pang bilisan. All of a sudden may ginawa si Soul g. and said Please stop. Isang sasakyan na may
kasamang babae sinabi ng boyfriend nito ang katagang binigkas ni Soul g. Please stop at tumungo sa holdapan. Anong sabi mo sabi ng kasama
nitong babae. Sinabihan ng soul g nito sa accomplice ng holdaper May paparating tumakbo na kayo. Tumingin ang accomplice at nakita nga
ang paparating na sasakyan. Takbo na tayo tol may tao sabi nito. Umalis ang mga holdaper at makikita sa isa na nanghinayang ito at
nagalit sa accomplice niya. Inaya ng driver sumakay si Mariel ngunit tumanggi si Mariel at tumakbo pabalik ng opisina. Paguwi nito walang tigil
ang pag-iyak ni Mariel ang soul g nito ay niyakap lang ang dalaga to somehow comfort her. There there you're alright,ng mahimasmasan siya
ay inireport ang insidente sa pulis. Ngunit ang tunay na pangyayari at pagligtas sa kanya ay walang kaalam-alam si Mariel.

Bakit nga ba inililigtas lagi si Mariel anong nababalot na hiwaga sa kwintas niya.

Ending: Tumanda si Mariel at ang kanyang kwintas ay iniutos sa kanya na itapon sa dagat para makuha ng susunod na karapat-dapat. Read Chapter


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