D for Dental Duty

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

ABCs of the Haiku presents "D".

Dental Duty

Swifting through whiteness

The brush advises our tools

Water cleanses them


Submitted: April 01, 2009

© Copyright 2021 Cesar M. All rights reserved.

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write4change

I am not fan of Haikus, but you seem to understnd them. you wrote on my pge bout your first chpter of your book. i too have a first chapter of a book, however it is rather long. i suggest we swap, but I want honesty , if you cant go on, then tell me so. I offered this beofre to a new writter and his comment was " good but long" I know he did not read it.

so do not comment until you look at it, then let us go on how about it?

I will read some more of your work. cat

Sat, April 4th, 2009 12:03pm

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Thank you for your comment.

Sat, April 4th, 2009 11:40am

Kiss Me While I Cry

Unique poems.
Again, oddly humerous.
And, once more, great poem.

`Gabriel

Tue, April 7th, 2009 3:46am

scott 37

Great piece

Mon, April 27th, 2009 6:20am

annaramos

Okay, now you have we thinking. Are you in the dental profession? This is the second time you mentions something about the dental anatomy.

Mon, July 13th, 2009 1:02am

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