Only twilight.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is a poetry about vision, struggle , hardships, darkness, light, positive attitude.

Listen 'O' guys ! Tell us the wise, In the dawn if we rise. Delight 'O' nature showers sky, Countless treasures dip in disguise. Uphill task 'nd impending fight, Jig jag path and swing of kite. Slowly and steadily touch that hight, You are the warrior you are the knight. Mission is long but vision is bright, Deep sight intake and keep quite. Move and march keep it tight, Black will fly and save 'O' white. Sure but steady comes moonlight, Arduous adventure all despite. Smile 'O' brave you are the might, Dissappears the dark,,, only twilight.


Submitted: August 13, 2014

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unmasked delusions

This was so unique and entertaining in a way, loved the way it flowed :)

Wed, August 13th, 2014 4:46pm

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Charlie Dewatt

:) thank very much . Thanks for reading and for ur lovely comment.

Wed, August 13th, 2014 5:17pm

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DLCannon

I like this one. But try to reply thru the comments where it says "reply" instead of giving yourself a comment. That way I can read your replies after I comment.

Wed, August 13th, 2014 10:58pm

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Charlie Dewatt

Hi cannon thanks for reading . I really can't see any reply option . Honestly ! I am using bookie on my phone only .

Thu, August 14th, 2014 3:04am

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