Why only bad

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Its my another small piece of work . Please feel free to comment . I will accept criticism happily too .

When someone says this world is bad ,I don't find it right *** I don't agree that its only dark when there is so much light. I don't feel much good when someone says everyone is bad*** when I see good people I feel so glad. Why only bad news everywhere when there is so much good to tell*** people who talk about Devils only, they making this planet like a hell . There is so much love, there is so much fun ***not only hate not only gun. Few bad are there who want to rule the world ***who want to hide the truth who want to fool the world. Life is so simple life is so sweet *** just fight to win , there is no defeat .


Submitted: August 08, 2014

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DLCannon

I have no opinion about the world. I don't live in it. But I do know that woman are nothing but cheaters and liars. They have no heart They just want to hurt men. They are not capable of falling in love. They only use us. But I still love to fall in love, 'cause like I said, I don't live in reality.

Mon, August 11th, 2014 5:46am

Charlie Dewatt

Thanks canon , I really needed these kinda feedbacks . It gives me knowledge about what I am writing . I really appreciate your comments .

Mon, August 11th, 2014 6:19am