Submitted: July 25, 2010
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Harshal
Deep anguish and hurt, a definite agony pours out of each word and phrase that is written.
Mon, August 2nd, 2010 9:39pmUse of phrase 'Cutting class' feels a little repetitive to me. But it's a poetry and not a prose. So it's for you to keep whatever you like.
Well written, keep writing.
Warm regards
Harshal
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lol. thanks. i was such a bad kidXD idk what i was thinking! the repedtitve cutting class was following me around that whole day. it was repeating in my mind much like the poem itself. thanks for the comment :]
Fri, August 6th, 2010 11:25pm