Dear God

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

Writing is a way of communication.

Summer days…


Dear God,


You made each day so wonderful!

The touch of the sun’s beaming rays and the summer breeze

are perfect confidant for a heart in awe of You

 I stand amazed by the radiance of the sun for somehow

it signifies hope for the days to come.

It also gives glow and life to every existence it dashes.


And as I fix my gaze towards the sky,

It is wonderful!

It is so blue,

It’s like the color of someone’s eyes,

And that makes me wonder even more of what color Your eyes has…

What color would it be?

The blue sky,

That when I look at it,

It’s like I’m drawn into it.

As if it’s indicating something like,

“I’ll never let you go.”


My heart flatters for what my eyes are seeing.

The plants,

They are dancing with the wind.

While my soul delights for what my ears are hearing.

Though there’s silence everywhere,

But it’s the reason why I could hear the bird’s chirping,

and that I could hear against the roof the coconut leaves are swaying.

Truthfully, it brought forth peace and happiness.

The very idea of Your splendor astonishes me!

Your creations give life to my being,

And still to my wearisome days.



Dear God,


Dry leaves are scattered everywhere.

The soil is now dry.

The plants are soon to wilt.

For now life goes on without the rain.

It’s summer!

It’s the sunny days,

And this is what it does.

It’s always been like this.

But it sure is lovely still;

With the wind blowing from somewhere,

With children playing everywhere,

With thoughts that are of full cheer.

It’s summer!



Dear God,


I’ve sweep the dry leaves,

Burnt it down that they may turn into ashes

And nourish the earth’s floor.

The smoke produced from the burnt leaves,

I’ve enjoyed watching it,

It’s going everywhere,

It’s following the pattern wherever the wind blows.

It’s free.


I’ve watered the plants.

And the soil absorbed it swiftly.

Sure, it’s really thirsty.


Dear God,


Summer is closely coming to an end.

I’m looking forward to see the soil, plants and everything in the surface get refreshed.

To once again hear the pouring of the water touching the rooftops,

And the thunder outside and the lighting that will follow:

Life has been like that here.

A cyclic motion of things repeated through time.

It is so incredible to fathom…

That even if ages of ages have passed,

You are still the same.


Everything in this world has undergone drastic modifications.

 Nonetheless You are the only exemption,

You never have changed.

You never have got tired,

Of hearing our shellfish talks and forgiving our continual sins;

You love us anyway,

Even if You know that we’ll transgress again.

You are magnificent.

You are true.

You are great.

You are alive,

You’re the horn of our salvation.

Submitted: April 07, 2014

© Copyright 2020 Chazeeh. All rights reserved.

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Beautiful Creation

Wonderful! :D I liked it! ~B.C.

Mon, April 7th, 2014 9:25pm


Daghang salamat, it's the corresponding of the word thank you so much in my native language.

Mon, April 7th, 2014 2:42pm


Emmett Cohl

This rocked Chaz! I hope you don't mind me calling you that, it's such a cool nickname! This really is awesome, let me know of any future works! You have such talent I can tell it's eager, awaiting at the end of your pen ready to just flow. It gets a like from me! ~Emily

Mon, April 7th, 2014 11:31pm


Chaz? It does not sound bad at all, and certainly I would not mind. It sounded just like me. Thank you so much for the appreciation Emily, can I call you that? =D It means so much to me, I don't know what to say anymore, I kinda lost my mind upon reading your comment about my work. I can't help but to smile. Once again, "Daghang salamat" it means Thank you so much in my native language.

Mon, April 7th, 2014 11:03pm


Joel Twister

Damn!! This was beautifully beautiful!!!!! I meant it! U did an handsome work!!! Brilliant!!! Xoxoxoxoxzoxoox Love it! :D
Keep it up, smile

Wed, April 9th, 2014 1:01pm


Wow, I was stunned by your comment, =D, ahahahaha... I meant it, Thank You!

Thu, April 17th, 2014 5:41am



all I can say to this, is, amen, alleluia, may god be with you always, to write something like this, is to have god at your side. bless you.

Sun, April 20th, 2014 2:55pm


GOD BLESS YOU TOO artie1947!

Mon, April 21st, 2014 1:49am



perfectly other words to say!!!


Wed, May 28th, 2014 10:00am


To God be the Glory! Salamat sa pag'basa prix..

Thu, November 13th, 2014 6:51am

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