Violet Wings-part 2

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
When Mickey finally wakes up, he finds someone he never thought he would find

Submitted: July 16, 2009

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"I am dead, I am free."
The darkness that sucked me in felt comfortable, and, scary at the same time, but something was different , I died on my soft bed, then why was the mattress I laid on hard? and somewhat wet.
I must have been in hell, after all anyone who offs themselves don't exactly get a front row Joe in heaven, in fact they burn in hell.
Now something really felt different, I was warm, not a burning kind of warm, but a comfortable kind of warm, and now the sounds were different; I heard water, like a babbling brook, and a trees leaves in the wind, "what the-" I opened my eyes to something that should have been hell.
I opened my eyes to a sunlit blue sky, I was lying on grass under a huge oak tree, "what the hell?!" I sat up scared, I was supposed to be dead, not dreaming, or...am I dead?
I got up, and walked around for awhile, I found the brook, it wasn't that far from the tree I was laying on earlier, I also found lavenders and wild pinkat flowers, they reminded me of someone I used to know who loved those flowers.
"Where am I?" I said to myself, "why am I here anyways?" I started to get more scared a bit, I was alone in this...this...this heaven basically, I walked up to the oak tree again, now something was different, there was a swing, but not just that, a girl was sitting on the swing, her back was faced towards me, her long black hair was flowing straight down on her lean, naked, pale, body.
Even without looking at her face I felt I knew her, she was swinging soft and smoothly, not even moving her legs or feet, just letting her body and wind move her.
I walked up to her, thinking this maybe the most stupidest thing I have ever done, "Alex, is that you?"
She turned around,it was her, her dark long hair covered her breast, and she still had the same baby face, and big lips, but now she had violet eyes, which was kinda strange.
"Mickey!" she jumped off the swing and ran into me with open arms, and we bear hugged each other for a long time, "oh my God Mickey I can't believe your here."
"I know!" I paused then asked, "um...where is here anyways?"
She looked at me with her big violet eyes, laughed then said, "tehehehe! silly your in heaven, well to be frank your in my heaven."
"What do you mean by that? I killed myself, shouldn't I be in hell?"
She laughed again, "well when I say my heaven, I mean, when someone dies God lets them create their own sanctuary, you know like their own room in heaven, like remember when Mom and Dad used to fight, we would run away to the basement and hide in that old cubbie, where no one would find us."
Now I was the one laughing, "HAHA! yeah I remember, so this is basically heaven right? just yours."
"Yes it is."
"Cool, but why aren't I in hell, I killed myself, isn't that a sin?"
"Au contraire, your not dead, at least not yet."
"What?"
"Exactly your not dead yet," she then looked at me, then the sunny and springy world of hers "heaven" turned black and stormy, the oak tree which had the swing on it, was now dead and lifeless, the swing was now a hanging rope, the brook was now a menacing ocean, with deadly tidal waves, and the grass was gone, now there were volcanoes.
I looked at Alex, her violet eyes were also a menacing red, "oh my God, I want to be alive now."


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