The Butterfly Dies

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A Sequel to the classic i wrote!, after you find out sometimes the one you wished for isnt what they seemed to be

I used to pass you once or twice, but I didn't really see.
I looked at all the other ones and wished that they were me.
Often times I'd stare at you and pleaded that you'd notice,
But now I guess I've learned the truth and now I finally know this:
When I spot a caterpillar, I'll stop and think of you,
And how you changed my underneath and made my heart so blue.
Inside of you were hate and lies and things I shouldn't mention.
But why tell the truth at all? It causes us so much tension.
The story shaped, the truth then bloomed, and your love for me was gone.
And then I realized suddenly, you faked it all along.
Whenever I do see you though, I'll remember what you said,
But now that the whole truth is out, well, the butterfly is dead.


Submitted: January 12, 2008

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gothiktinkerbella

lol wow its almsot the complete opposite of the butterfly.
great job! xD
sry..i would write a better comment. But I am half asleep. its 9am and i still havent gone to bed. I was trying to finish chapter 3.
lol
and i did yay!
now i am going to bed.,

Sat, January 12th, 2008 5:38pm

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Go sleep you crazy girl, sleep is needed to write you know!XD

Thu, January 17th, 2008 6:17pm

poewhit

Very nice poem of expression & truths.

Sat, January 12th, 2008 8:51pm

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Thank you, lovely comment, look forward to reading your stuff! ((*Cherry*))

Thu, January 17th, 2008 6:11pm

mum55

Very good poem lots of thoughts to understand......Truth!.....thats a words all alone.... thanks for sharing Juliet

Sat, January 12th, 2008 10:04pm

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lol thanks for your lovely comment! i love getting support since i have been writing for so long and sometimes it feels like no one is really serious about writing, but yeah thanks it means alot

Tue, January 15th, 2008 8:46pm

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