My Favorite Color

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

It was originally a poem I wrote for English class last year, but I liked it so much that I kept it.. Yeah such an impact, I've had it written for 1 year, so what!! Haha

Slowly trickling down the walls
dripping carefully through my slitted fingers
forming a small river through the halls
in my hands is where the blood lingers

Dancing elegantly from weapon to floor
shining magically under the night's gleaming
When I raise my blade you will be no more
Thick red beauty, you're no longer breathing

 

Beautiful rich blood colored mahogany
like my hair, flowing, shining beautifly
the reason you're now pretty ties to your wronging me
the spattered beauty arranged brilliantly

My favorite color is one that you'd dread
my favorite color has to be red


Submitted: October 26, 2012

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Lemonizer

I love it, gave me shrills! Please publish more of this.

Fri, October 26th, 2012 7:44pm

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Thank you! I will ^o^
If you liked this you might also like my short story "Tainted Souls"~

Fri, October 26th, 2012 1:18pm

harris1995

ah. Nice work. Keep it up!

Sat, October 27th, 2012 5:14am

Author
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Thanks a bunch!! ^_^

Fri, October 26th, 2012 11:48pm

Headphones Vocal Method

I'm not great at writing poety like this but ah i loved reading this, you got a great style : )

Sat, October 27th, 2012 9:30pm

Author
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Haha thank you!! I'm so glad that you like it!

Sat, October 27th, 2012 4:07pm

FrozenDreamer

I totally love it! It's one of the best horror poems I've read before!

Sun, October 28th, 2012 12:39pm

Author
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Thank you so much! that really means a lot to me, especially since this was only written for English class last year!! haha

Sun, October 28th, 2012 8:34am

cleo brimstone

I definitely enjoyed your poem. I especially loved the lines "Dancing elegantly from weapon to floor shining magically under the night's gleaming."
Great write.

Fri, November 2nd, 2012 7:44pm

Author
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Oho thank you!~

Sat, November 3rd, 2012 3:33am

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