You Really Don't Love Me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

96% of teenagers say "I LOVE U" and dont mean it. There is only 4% that do mean it. I guess love really doesn't make sense to most people.

When guys say "i love u FOREVER"
They mean...
"i love u till i meet someone BETTER"

"Nothing hurts more than watching the one u love, Love someone else."

Sick Of Crying
Tired Of Trying
Yeah I'm Smiling
But Inside I'm Dying

I wrote your name in the sky,
But the wind blew it away

I wrote your name in the sand,
But the ocean swept it away

I wrote your name in the sea,

But the waves carried it away

I wrote your name in my heart,
And forever it will stay


Submitted: March 08, 2009

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DeathAngel

this is kool :D

Sun, March 8th, 2009 10:25pm

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thanks. I really like it though It is all messed up and not the way I wanted it to look.

Sun, March 8th, 2009 3:29pm

Vicky1234

i liked it. Very good. :D

Sun, March 8th, 2009 10:42pm

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thanks. I like it too.

Sun, March 8th, 2009 3:51pm

Brian W

My favourite part is
"When guys say "i love u FOREVER"
They mean...
"i love u till i meet someone BETTER"
This is true for many teenagers whether male or female BUT guys do say it more to try and score from the girl. A good poem I liked it

Sun, March 8th, 2009 11:01pm

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thanks. I really like that line too. I think it's my favorite in the whole poem.

Sun, March 8th, 2009 7:31pm

xXMomentsLikeThisXx

Very nice... this poem totally caught my attention. =)

Mon, March 9th, 2009 5:39am

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thanks. I wonder how it did that though... My poems don't really "catch attention" It must have been my icon right? No I'm kidding. Thanks for the comment.

Tue, March 10th, 2009 7:45pm

Ve Ce Wall

OMFreakingG! You did this? You are great. I loved it so and so I will like it.

Sat, March 21st, 2009 9:10pm

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thank you! I really like hearing those nice words! :)

Sat, March 21st, 2009 3:29pm

Jacob B

God damn man that is the truest stuff ever. Except for one thing, not all guys mean that...Btw I am thirteen too xD

Sun, April 19th, 2009 1:13am

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yeah i no not ALL guys say that. And yay we the same age! XD You stole my XD face! That my thing! lol.

Sat, April 18th, 2009 9:14pm

ashbash400

I really like this poem, its really well written :)

Tue, May 26th, 2009 12:02am

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Thank you!

Sat, May 30th, 2009 2:01pm

flavoredair

Awww, this made me sad. Good job.

Thu, June 4th, 2009 7:41pm

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Thank you. Is being sad a good thing?

Thu, June 4th, 2009 7:37pm

Kelly Jones

I know your pain, it really does hurt. It really does. Great poem, it really spoke to me. God knows her name and face will always be in my heart. But it took me back to the good times I had with her. Thank you for posting this. Did this really happen to you?

Sat, July 11th, 2009 5:20am

cutiecristal

this really good..and true!

Thu, July 30th, 2009 9:24am

AmassingFragrance

Beautiful and sometimes true even .. (thou not in all cases) .. but i think i can see what you are trying to say.. You have powerful last lines..

"I wrote your name in my heart,
And forever it will stay"

A part of a wholesome poem :)

Thanks ..:)

Wed, August 4th, 2010 1:40am

morgan13

This poem was so well written, wonderful job
its my new favorite!
:)

Sat, October 16th, 2010 7:11am

erica19

wow i love this!! im only thirteen to and i written some pretty good poems i think anyway if u read them tell me what you think. but yours i completely loved:)

Sun, November 21st, 2010 7:31pm

amarie

- I really like this poem great job.
My favorite line from the poem is ( When guys say "i love u FOREVER"
They mean...
"i love u till i meet someone BETTER")

.... I really like that part because its so true and boys do that and so do girls .

Mon, December 27th, 2010 10:28am

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