W h i s p e r s

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is written from the whispers of my heart for someone so special....

My eyes are blind they cannot see
You standing here next to me
My tears they flow but in vain
A heart now that so full of pain
My hands can’t feel your soft silky hair
I always thought our love was beyond compare
My dreams no more fill your nights
No more stars that shine so bright
My hope all gone is this the end
A road ahead with many bends
My rainbows gone from angry skies
No longer any pretty butterflies
My minds quite shattered, what went wrong?
Still I listen each day to our song
My sun grown cold in the sky above
Always remember it is you I love
My bedroom just an empty place
Yet on my wall I see the silhouette of your face
My foot it slipped and down I did fall
You never heard me when I did call
My life now shattered in pieces of many
Not worth a pound or even a penny
My soul it so yearns so much for you
In baths of lavender and blue
My pen no longer wants to write
It has no use to beg or fight
My ears no longer your voice can hear
Those whispers of love when you were here

Submitted: May 07, 2010

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This is so sadly beautiful my friend. Very well penned, and you know me...I love rhyme. Nice Job as always!

Fri, May 7th, 2010 1:59pm


Thanx Angellynn appreciate your comment as I always do. Smiles Chiqui

Thu, May 13th, 2010 5:23pm


One of my favorites of yours(= Amazing write.

Sat, May 8th, 2010 2:23pm


Thank you Virginia so glad you liked this. Hugs Chiqui

Thu, May 13th, 2010 5:27pm


Very beautifully written. I love this, deep and honest. Thankyou for posting.

Sun, August 29th, 2010 5:51am


Thank you for reading and commenting Unbreakable - Smiles Chiqui

Tue, December 7th, 2010 7:11pm

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