My true love, my butterfly

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

I wrote this story for the sweetest boy in the world, he is truly my butterfly. He read this story when i wrote it, and at first i thought it made him sad, but then he explained that it wasnt sadness he felt, he was genuinly touched by it. so if it can effect him like that, i sincerely hope that it will give other people the same reaction. please comment, good or bad, any comment is welcome.

Oh god, the things i would do for him, and yet, he never knows it.

For my shy butterfly, remains a shy butterfly, as am i, but yet we stay together.

We are just two shy buterflies whose paths crossed one faithful day

and to my surprise, four years later,  my butterfly is still with me.

Neither I, nor him, Would ever admit to it, to being so alone when we're not together,

We see our faults, and we know our faults, yet society will show us them time and time again.

We walk through a crowded school, immune to the jabs and stabs at our already small egos

But we fly on and on.

No man, nor breeze, not anything can take us away from each other, but each other.

And one day, we may fly seperatly, to meet again, or to vanish from the others life forever, but what we do is what we do

For he is my butterfly, my shy sweet, beautiful loving butterfly who gave me my wings

Who hatched from the most beautiful cocoon,  from the sweetest catipillar, stay strong you, for i am here.

And oh god, the things i would do for you.


Submitted: November 21, 2009

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ECEC333

It's more like a list of feelings and situations than a story. I think you could turn it into a story, but you have to detach yourself somewhat from it.
Story or not it speaks of a very sweet relationship and I enjoyed reading it.

Sun, November 22nd, 2009 2:47pm

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yeah, i understand what you mean, i didnt mean to put it as a short story, im new and im just having a lot of problems with adding things, now i need to try and fix that :) what do you suggest i put it as? :)

Sun, November 22nd, 2009 3:23pm

PeaceLoveLingleton

i would post it as a poem... it has the flow and feeling of a poem... i like it a lot, especially how you made the comparison so easily...

Thu, December 10th, 2009 2:43am

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oh, thank you :) i had trouble trying to decide what to put it as

Wed, December 9th, 2009 7:32pm

sunnyheeth

good mathapor. Glad you have found someone like him.
he's a definite keeper.
ocourse i'm drawing my own conclusions here... a bf perhaps?

Thu, May 6th, 2010 11:45pm

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hmm... i think you may have figured me out lol, he is a keeper, he's kinda in a lot of my poems lol = ) and he knows that.

Sun, May 9th, 2010 12:05pm

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