My Lapse In Judgement For You

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

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I have my own thing going 

And I have no need for you 

Don't try for me 

And say you have seen it through 


Your more of a black stain 

On whats been these last months 

Why have i tried 

When I have never felt your touch 


If this is what you call more then a friend,

I dont know whats worse for me now, or what was then;

Try me some more and see how it lasts 

Its only going down, but is it my lapse 


Was it really always me going for the gold 

Trying so hard but still being told;

Please for myself spare some help 

Give me the crown, or let me shame myself 




Submitted: March 07, 2012

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I can relate to this. Gaining independence is always a tough road.

Nice read

Wed, March 7th, 2012 6:22am


Yes its one of those feelings and i used it as also going back and fourth with the situation in someones life

Tue, March 6th, 2012 10:25pm

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