She Doesn't See It In Herself

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: She Doesn't See It In Herself

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I met you under stars, the train ringing, and a glow in your eyes 

We watched the sunrise and kissed, I felt something, maybe she could be mine; 
Just the thought thee imagination, this women going somewhere so far in life 
She has all this love hidden just brought at by the two bullies that are her knights 
Her blonde hair, green eyes or maybe blue it's been so long since I've seen 
I'd hope to see them again, I've seen such a girl in my dreams; 
Her life is her own, she rules it all, she can become anything her heart desires 
What one does when seeing a true beauty is one look and admire 
Her spirt, her fight, a desire with strong will, and a stubborn fight 
For anything she truly loves she would go far and away to show them her light; 
So radiant when the sun shines down,hair  so beautifully flowing on the beach, sand sinking in her toes 
Lord my breath taken away under the stars, my blood started to flow, as I laid looking at her wanting to know 
So bright the light sheds upon her, she is truly beautiful in every way 
If I could name them all, Id be naming for days 

Submitted: January 07, 2016

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Thu, January 7th, 2016 7:02am


Lol I think it's cool someone from Japan read this thank you my friend for finding it interesting

Wed, January 6th, 2016 11:39pm

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