Bloody Sheets

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A jealous ex-lover confronts the man who's now sleeping with their partner. (very short)

Submitted: April 11, 2016

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They did it in a hotel room. 

The place was okay, for the location they were in. It was a three and a half stars, near the seaside; a grey and salty seaside. 

Dan was staring at the ceiling for a few moments, thinking "Damn, I'm good!"

Dan turned his head toward her. she made a face that said "Damn, you're good!"

He raised a cocky grin. 

"I'm a pornstar, I'm allowed to be arrogant" 

He couldn't remember her name; he never remembered their names. 

"If she were ever up to it, this girl would make a pretty decent porn star. She has the fake tits, the blonde hair; I think she'd do just fine"

Dan got out of bed and made his way into the bathroom, still bare-ass, leaving the door open. The girl made a sexy gesture and asked him to get back into bed, but Dan had to take a piss. 

Whilst in mid piss, a great sound erupted and a stranger came in through the door. 

Dan was startled and his piss missed the toilet, getting some on his leg and the floor, whilst the girl jumped out of the bed, covering herself with the bedsheet. 

The stranger, wielding a 44. magum, roared "I KNEW IT!" towards the girl

The girl replied "What the fuck, James - what are you doing here?!" 

The man named James turned his head over to the open bathroom, seeing Dan, freightened with piss running down his leg. 

"Oh shit, oh shit oh shit" was the only thing Dan's mind could compute. 

James pointed his 44. towards Dan, but turned his head to face the girl. 

"YOU BITCH! YOU DIRTY FUCKING WHORE!

 James' screams produced a large amount of spit which shot out with the words. 

The girl, more pissed off than scared, yelled back

"WE BROKE UP, JAMES. WHAT THE FUCK YOU CRAZY BASTARD, HAVE YOU BEEN FOLLOWING ME???!!!"

James looked at the girl, then looked over to Dan's naked body, throwing at him a furious gesture with his gun; then faced the girl again, screaming

"I THOUGHT WE WERE JUST ON A BREAK?!"

Dan, with him arms up in the air, thought "What the fuck has this girl gotten me into?"

"NO DUMBASS, I BROKE UP WITH YOU! YOU'RE A PATHETIC PIECE OF SHIT AND I WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH YOU ANYMORE!" 

The girl replied, venomously. 

She then contiuned 

"YOU'RE STUPID, BORING AND WORTHLESS! I HATE YOU, JAMES. I FUCKING HATE Y-"

An explosive bang erupted, then a thud, then silence. 

The girls head was just mush. The walls, the bed and the carpet were stained with brain. 

Dan looked over to James, who just stood there, continuing to point his gun at where the girl was standing.

The killers eyes were draining tears. 

The few seconds that Dan thought would be his last, were the longest he'd ever experienced. 

James then looked deep in Dan's eyes, took a bite of his 44. and blew his brains out. 

Dan just got his clothes and left the scene without giving it a second glance. 

 

 



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