The astronaut

Poem by: Chris Marshall

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An astronaut becomes insane as he falls into a black hole

I turned back,

I felt like a paper aeroplane,

Drifting through a soft summer wind,

My limbs became spaghetti-like,

There were no longer days passing,

I felt like a god,

Seeing the future,

Not having a countdown to my time,

There were only three barriers,

The past,

Me,

And the future,

Always falling,

Never touching,

Forever existing.

Submitted: July 17, 2015

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Cathy98

I like it but I suggest adding more lines to make it more detailed cause I had to re-read it a few times to fully understand

Fri, July 17th, 2015 1:44am

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Alright, thanks

Thu, July 16th, 2015 6:46pm

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