i'm a fan of peter pan, still at my age.
Being a teenager i just hate the negative sides of it
but i don't want to grow up and face the big punch in the face that you get when your an adult
in neverland you never grow up
i really wish i could go there

Fly me away

 

Fly me to Neverland

Oh, I can be Wendy

I want to really understand

How it can be trendy

If I stay in earth one more day

I will explode with anger

I don’t want to grow up

But what other options are there?

Where is Peter Pan?

And Tinkerbell?

Take me away from purgatory

I don’t want to burn in hell

I am a very violent child

There is this girl that I know

But I can’t stand her

Wish I knew all the ways to slander

I only have my fists, like a hook on that pirate

I could eat much more and no need for a diet

Oh fly me away

Fly me away

Fly me off to Neverland

That’s where I want to stay

Give me a name

Give me a name

I could be a lost girl

If you would give me a name

No school, no rules, it’s cool, no fools

Dreams could come true

Mermaids by the lagoon

Pirates invading soon

Injuns in their huts

Tiger Lilly is the gal

Never speak a word

Peter Pan is here

So wipe away those tears

We’re following the leader

The leader, the leader

Where ever he may go

Will we find the gold?

No one ever knows

Fly me away

Fly me away

Don’t bother looking for me

Because Neverland is where I stay.

 


Submitted: June 02, 2013

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brokenwings07

this brings me back a lot of childhood memories. It was very well writeen, continue the hard work! :)

Mon, June 3rd, 2013 12:17am

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thank you so much i will continue the hard work, i'm glad you liked it. Peter pan was my life i can't live without him :D

Sun, June 2nd, 2013 5:24pm

Christopher Bradbury

This is a very original take. Using something familiar (Peter Pan) to deliver a personal message helps people relate. Once again, I get the feeling that there should be music behind this. Let me know if I'm wrong, but there is a very strong beat to your work, which I like very much.

Tue, June 4th, 2013 11:59am

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thank you, it's suppose to be a rap, i wanted to rap it and record it onto it but i'm not that good at rapping. Most of my poems are songs that you can sing, rap or just recite.
Thanks i'm glad you liked it :D

Tue, June 4th, 2013 5:01am

kannette

pretty good one :)

Fri, June 14th, 2013 8:43am

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thanks im glad you like it :D

Sat, June 15th, 2013 6:48am

Rose Burg

Peter Pan is my favourite story! This poem is so good! It certainly made me smile :) Well done xx

Thu, June 20th, 2013 10:18am

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