The CrossRoads

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: True Confessions  |  House: Booksie Classic

Life is unbearable at some times with the test trials and tribulations. People telling you what to do until we reach at a point of wondering what to do next. I hear to voices and wonder which one to listen to....






 Here I am, standing in the midst of two roads.One is wide dark and lonely with alot of sink holes and death traps but it seems as thought everyone is taking it . The other is straight and narrow but at the end as I peek through i can see a bright light at the end glowing brighter and brighter with a golden gate at the end. Something told me to go on inside but then a dark shadow jumped down infront of me and blocked me. This shadow tapped into me and found my weakness music. The music drawed me l into the dark,lonely road. As I walked down that road I thought it was wonderful all the human pleasures,nobody to correct your wrong, nobody to make you feel bad of what you did. I did not care what anyone had to say it was all beautiful in my blinded eyes.

Suddenly an angel descended infront of me trying to break the thick silver chains that had locked me in and captured my soul.I was in the eye of the hurricane, One dark and dirty voice told me to stay saying," I am your best friend you know I would give you anything you want!". Suddenly the angel swopped down infront of me , " Dont fall for it he may give you plenty but you always end up empty, at the end you will just die because they are stealing peices of you ......." They both descended back from where they were. I sat at the side of the dark road thinking about what they both said reliasing that the angel did not say much but it had alot in meaning. " Wait, wait wait wait yuh wanna kill me, remember the girls,remember the money yuh wanna kill me yuh cah kill me!" said the dark voice whispering in my ears. The angel came behind me and shouted thats just desires of the flesh resist the temptations,, its a test! 

"But why am I being tested it just end up to being a mess I can see it now destruction is infront of me get me out" I cried. The angel answered and said to prove that gold is real and genuine we must test it and if you wanna come out you must fight break the chains and believe, resist your weakness. The angel spoke and the music got louder and louder its as if I was being hypnotised my eyes came of my focus I was lost could not seem to find my way. I headed this way to which I thought I saw the light but it was the dark wicked voice and his friends tricking me. As dropped to my knees as was at my breaking point I covered my ears and tried to concentrate on my goal . as I began to concentrate the dark voice tried harder and harder but the angels protected me. I began to believe and desended into the place I wanted to be the dark voice seemed terrified and began to say you will be back soon. I got frighten but the angels encouraged me to stay strong . Ever since I was on the right track I was happier as I know my life was in safe hands and today I am able to help others to stay on the right track.

TO BE CONTINUED................

Submitted: August 07, 2013

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This is a really Interesting story :) your writing style is brilliant because not everyone writes like an advanced writer ^_^ Great Job!!! will surely want to read more further. KMU~

Sat, August 10th, 2013 6:55am


Why thank you! Tehe!!

Sat, August 10th, 2013 8:18am


This sounds like it will be a good story. I am looking forward to it. I love how it is written. :)

Sat, August 10th, 2013 3:22pm


Thanks and I should make it a story soon!!

Sat, August 10th, 2013 11:53am

Jennifer Broady

This is really good! Not my usual reading preference at all, but I was really drawn in... Definitely looking forward to your next update! Your writing style is really unique as well: you switch from fast reading to having to think about what you're reading seamlessly. Brilliant.

Tue, August 13th, 2013 12:44am



Mon, August 12th, 2013 6:30pm

Delaney Lynn

This is great! Can't wait to see what comes next!

Tue, August 13th, 2013 2:22am



Tue, August 13th, 2013 12:24pm


That was very nice. Like the other commentators, I enjoyed your writing style. I will definitely be watching for some of your other works. Meanwhile, feel free to read either of my current short stories.:)

Tue, August 13th, 2013 5:36am


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Tue, August 13th, 2013 12:23pm


This was a good short read, I enjoyed your descriptions,they were very vivid.

Tue, August 13th, 2013 12:49pm


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Tue, August 13th, 2013 12:22pm


Intriguing story with a very nice hand in writing.
I loved it and gave it a "Like".
You're very talented and I can't wait to read more of your work. :)

Thu, August 15th, 2013 1:12am


Thank you!!! :D

Thu, August 15th, 2013 9:17am


Your work was interesting the insight is great I would focus on details but overall enjoyable I hope you check out some of my pieces as well.

Thu, August 22nd, 2013 4:02pm


Thanks and I will check out your work in return! HAve A MiGhTy DaY!!!!!! :D

Thu, August 22nd, 2013 11:44am

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