"Can I Have This Kiss Forever?"

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A poem about being with the one you love and embracing the moment together.

My love for you,

Turns my cheeks a rosy red,
 
Passion erupts inside of me,
 
At the sight of your irresistible blue eyes,
 
Our embrace,
 
Turns the barren lands into green meadows,
 
As I feel your warmth,
 
Under an array of purple and orange skies,
 
Only one question remains,
 
Can I have this kiss forever?


Submitted: April 17, 2011

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Buffy Summers

That is so beautiful.

Mon, April 18th, 2011 7:13am

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Thank you! :)

Mon, April 18th, 2011 3:29pm

Flames of Night

awwwwwe :D i wish there was a "LOVE IT!" button on here! haha

Mon, April 18th, 2011 9:09pm

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Awww...thanks! :)

Mon, April 18th, 2011 3:28pm

fresh spirits

This must be so warm for the one you have been sending...i voted.

Tue, May 31st, 2011 5:31pm

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Thank you! :) I'm glad you like it!

Sun, June 5th, 2011 8:28am

LizLew

Really sweet. :)

Sun, July 31st, 2011 11:30pm

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Thank you! :)

Sun, August 7th, 2011 2:42pm

babydoll

Awe, I'm blushing. :)

Sun, September 11th, 2011 1:38am

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Awww...the poem did its job! Haha...glad you like it!

Sat, September 10th, 2011 7:05pm

kreeko0o

awww i love it !!! i think its sweet an soft ... i love poems like this >>> makes me wanna cry >>>:") loved it

^^kreeko^^

Tue, September 27th, 2011 7:18pm

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Thank you! I'm glad you like it! XD

Sat, October 1st, 2011 7:03am

Honeysuckle1310

wow. i love it

Sun, November 20th, 2011 12:55am

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Thank you! XD

Sun, November 20th, 2011 9:58am

Davinder Ranu

A very nice thing to say to a girl..CT!....I like itt....:)

Sun, December 4th, 2011 1:00am

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Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

Sat, December 3rd, 2011 5:39pm

aliciab1804

Aw, this was very romantic. I liked how short and simple it was yet it perfectly captured such complex emotions. Nicely done!

Mon, January 23rd, 2012 5:58pm

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Thank you! XD

Mon, January 23rd, 2012 10:26am

BITSxOFxKINKY

simply gorgeous

Sat, February 18th, 2012 1:39am

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Thank you! XD

Tue, March 6th, 2012 7:06pm

phil leonard

cool I like it alot ;)

Sat, March 3rd, 2012 5:58pm

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Thank you! XD

Tue, March 6th, 2012 7:00pm

pvk36

Orange skies, right now; I am viewing the sky through your view out of my window CT.

PVK36

Sun, February 17th, 2013 8:07am

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Awesome! :) Thanks!

Sun, February 17th, 2013 6:40am

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