Poem by: Christian Taylor
poetry, life, alone, haiku, silence
Submitted: September 08, 2010
Alone in this empty space
Hearing only the haunting stillness
Slowly draining my soul to nothing
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I loved this one. Especially the "haunting stillness" part.
Thank you...I'm glad you like it! :)
Great job Christian, well captured!
Teriffic job like it!
Thank you! :) I'm glad you like it!
Sweet! Thanks. :)
Wow, this really packs a ton of emotion for a haiku.
I love it.
Silence creeps me out...
Thanks...it means alot to me for you to say that. :)
SO deep!! loved it! :)
Brief but has alot of meaning...a job well done.
Thanks...I think haiku poems can pack so much meaning with very little to say. Glad you like the poem! :)
great little haiku, never done one myself but I must give it a go after your one is giving me inspiration
That's cool! Haikus are very easy to do...if you have any questions; I'll be glad to help.
Glad you like the poem! :)
this is great.
i love the setting and the feeling that you captured.
you have a great talent to fit such an amazing piece into a haiku like this great job
Thank you! You're words really mean alot! :)
Not everyone can write haiku's that capture a deep meaning. But you did. Great Job! Keep up the good work :)
Thank you! Really means alot! :) - CT
tonio likes this!
Thank you! XD
wow, short but very powerful!! GREAT SILENCE HERE!
Thank you! XD
Nicely written...Great Imagination
The short simpleness of a haiku is what I really love. This is beautiful! AMAZING! :) A++++++++ !!!! xD
short and simple but says it all! I love it
This perturbs me. I am in my element when all is quiet. I don't know what it is. Almost as though I'm afraid of sound. Amazing work yet again xx
Great haiku...It's amazing how so much emotion can be packed into so few syllables.
Thank you and that's very true!
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