Mornings With You

Desiree Davenport

Love this!

L.K. LilLoCksea

Beautiful! & to think that you just came up with that in the last half an hour... damn..
Anyways I love it!
Your lucky to have people like that in your life.

L.K.

Keke Serene

XD This is about coffee! Wonderful, very beautifully written! Unfortunately, I am too poor to afford coffee so I get my high off of other people and walking into coffee shops, Jesus, give me money so I can buy coffee. I was so recieved, I swear, I thought this was about a lover an I was like meh. But now I'm like coffee, heck yeah! I can relate to that, I love that! Mochas the best tho, my favorite, lord, I can eat and drink mocha ice cream and coffee for the rest of my life and die fat and happy. :) I like this a lot, an appropiate tribute praising coffee :)

J. W. Cooper

You my good man, are a man of great and exquisite poetry! The essence of this poem is great and your descriptions are fab! I liked how you started the piece off by saying "You are there to greet me every morning. Dependable; you bring a smile to my face." I love how this coffee is always there no matter what to greet you each and every morning, a dependable source of energy and one that always brings a smile to your face. You make it sound like you're talking about an actual person, especially with your 'Summary' and the 'Title' of the poem. "Giving me the strength when I am yawning, you are the one thing I can't replace." It's like thoughts on a relationship my friend, and what you do so well is talking as if you are speaking about a lover. You cleverly use your words in a way, that we are made to believe this piece revolves around your feelings about a'love' and how they make you feel so alive each morning. That my friend was extremely clever! "When my energy wanes, you are there. Your warm embrace fuels my spirit." I absolutely loved that line, especially how you describe it's warm embrace fuelling your spirit. You, like other writers that I've read, to a brilliant job of making such powerful statements and describing words in such a way, that they become so full of emotion and elegance. Instead of just putting something like "Your embrace my spirit," you've made it so much more by saying "Your warm embrace fuels my spirit." The way in which you personify coffee to almost be like a person is excellent! You go on to describe again with such eloquence and in a way that conveys so much imagery "Your aroma; my senses you ensnare. I crave you each day, begging you to visit." Wow!! There's a really strong connection between you and your morning coffee my friend and it certainly shows! I loved how you used the word 'ensnare' to describe how the morning coffee takes your senses. The word really seems to fit so well with your description Chris! There's this power behind your morning coffee my friend, and it seems to really show when you mention "I 'crave' you each day, begging you to visit." Your desire and need for this morning coffee is great and it reminds me of those religious paintings, where the saints or monks are looking up towards the sky and are looking for God or angels and are blessed with what they seek. Even to the very end, you write in such a clever, concise and methodical way my friend, making it read as though you are still talking about someone... About your love. "I couldn't face the day without you by my side. I keep you safe; you are so special to me." The relationship between you and the coffee exudes so much throughout this wondrous piece Chris; it oozes with such attention and passion! I also loved "Your secret is indecipherable." It's showing this sacredness around coffee and how precious it is to you and your every morning. What I thought was brilliant was the ending of your piece "You are my beautiful enigma, my morning coffee." Fantastic!!! How you describe the coffee as a 'beautiful enigma' it tantalises the tongue and really plays with our sense and the imagery we get from this description! The powerful bit was "My morning coffee," where at the end; we see that it is not in-fact a person who you are talking about, but about coffee and that's what makes this piece really stand out for me Chris! Wonderful work, such a great poem with plenty of luscious descriptions to fuel our desire to read on! As always my friend, such a great job! A very talented writer you are friend! Take great care and have a great day Chris! :)

J. W. Cooper

It's always a pleasure my friend! Your poems are always so full of things to talk about, that's why I love breaking them down and looking at them section by section. Your words are greatly appreciated indeed Chris so thank you kindly. :) That's not a problem at all; I really appreciate you taking the time to have a read of my allegory. :) Take care my friend and enjoy the rest of your day. :)

Jeff Bezaire

And here I thought it was going to be a dog or a cat! Although, I wondered about the aroma; pets don't have aromas. lol
Coffee is a great companion, too.
So wonderfully written and from the heart . . . for coffee. :)
A person's heart is a mysterious and complicated thing. Love holds many splendours. It's difficult to find anything or anyone who is better at motivating, invigourating, or making someone happier than a cup of coffee . . . except for maybe a pot of coffee.
A well written piece, sir! It speaks many truths.

SuzonneH

Love!! Twisted end, makes you doubt all of your ideas.

M.H. Parabola

I giggled so hard at that last line. I saw it coming but I wasn't sure until you dropped it at the end. I don't read too many poems with a decent sense of humor so this pleasantly surprised me. Unfortunately I'm more of a tea person than a coffee person, lmfao. But this still made me chuckle, every writer needs a good cup of coffee (or tea) in the morning! :D