Have I Gone Mad?

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic

This something i wrote while i was mad pissed.I was so pissed i punched a tiled wall and made a hole...anyway enjoy

Is this stress?
Is this madness?
Maybe its fury
or maybe I'm just angry.
The reason why I can't control this urge
is because I'm controlled by this jealous surge.
Is it wrong ti be jealous?
Maybe I'm just curious.
I don't want to feel this way
its a price I can't pay.
I smoke my cigarette and smoke consumes me
as it goes through my lungs and i blow see...
it disappears by the cold lust air
as I'm dying to you tight and play with your hair.
Its funny how I feel.
Its a feeling that's far to real.
Its like a bad seed
growing in my veins and as i smoke my weed.
I relax in this night,
I feel so light.
So light that I can touch the sky
until i fall and die.
My pain is real.
My pain is to much to deal.
I feel lost and rejected,
like if I'm just painted.
I'm destined to fail.
So I can't tell this tale.
As I'm wretched soul dies,
I'm fed up with lies.
This was your decision
and I'm beaten.
Have I gone mad?
Yes...
oh yes...
mad with love in which i thought i never had.
I love you so much that I can't explain,
like counting stars in this grassy plain.
As i think what else to say
I shed some tears while you stay
and I say \"you make things so easy...
and that's what i have been thinking lately\".
Babe i love you no matter what happens
I'm here because of your reasons.
So please don't let go.
Let me be your hero.


Submitted: July 25, 2010

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WilliamInkling

Nice, true emotions are always best :D

Sun, July 25th, 2010 5:23pm

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thnx bro.thnx for listenin and the advice

Sun, July 25th, 2010 3:21pm

Vincey Delaney

so terrific, awesome and just one perfect write!!! This is a huge hit with me, very loving indeed!!!

Sun, August 8th, 2010 9:17am

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thnx man glad u like it :)

Sun, August 8th, 2010 8:52am

Khano

Powerful. It's like emotion just rolling off the page [or the computer screen. lol]. Amazingly worded.

Tue, September 14th, 2010 6:53am

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thnx :)

Tue, September 14th, 2010 8:53am

OrigamiMe

there is a typo in line six. ti instead of to. the rhyme scheme works great but i noticed a change in meter about 2/3 the way through

Tue, October 12th, 2010 4:58pm

XtreMe me

woooooooow vivd emotions i loved the smoke part!
Xm

Sun, October 17th, 2010 5:30am

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jeje thnx XD

Sun, October 17th, 2010 11:53am

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