Invisiblility

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Alone...Dreadfully, painfully alone.

Alone...Dreadfully, painfully alone.

Lying in bed with my face in the pillow,

Hot tears seeping out nonstop.

Thinking of all the Hurt, and the Anguish.

All of the rejection.

Nothing can soothe this feeling,

Nothing.

He sees right through me and to far places,

And to him I am nothing.

They see a girl with no voice,

They barely see anything else.

Weird.

Why can't I be loved too?

Can I not be normal like you?

Never.

Nobody to hold my hand,

To laugh along with me,

Nobody to love.

Hated?

Perhaps, I don't really know.


Submitted: October 22, 2009

© Copyright 2021 Chrysta. All rights reserved.

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Imuildaeren

deep. i like it!! drop comments on some of my dtuff. thanks!!

Thu, October 22nd, 2009 7:35pm

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Thank you for reading1 :D
I'd be glad to read some of your writing~

Thu, October 22nd, 2009 12:41pm

XxShadowxX

Awww this is so sad, and really well written. You can feel the emotions written here, you have talent there :)

Thu, October 22nd, 2009 8:18pm

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Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.:)

Fri, October 23rd, 2009 4:54am

Alessandra Fireheart

Fascinating. I loved how every now and then there was a line with a single word. It threw the flow off a little bit yet it worked. I felt as if it was a moment where I should stop and think about what was just said more.

Sun, October 25th, 2009 12:11am

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Thank you for your insight, I love that you thought deeper within and past just the words. Keep reading! Your critisism is valued!

Mon, October 26th, 2009 7:28am

Zero Saint

Nice sad but nice, if that makes sense, just finished writting a poem that kinda don't make sense so i am still stuck in that sense of mind.

I really like this one.


JD

Sun, October 25th, 2009 3:53am

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Thanks. And yeah, i put alot of emotion into this.

Mon, October 26th, 2009 7:32am

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