Invisiblility
Poem by: Chrysta
Alone...Dreadfully, painfully alone.
Lying in bed with my face in the pillow,
Hot tears seeping out nonstop.
Thinking of all the Hurt, and the Anguish.
All of the rejection.
Nothing can soothe this feeling,
Nothing.
He sees right through me and to far places,
And to him I am nothing.
They see a girl with no voice,
They barely see anything else.
Weird.
Why can't I be loved too?
Can I not be normal like you?
Never.
Nobody to hold my hand,
To laugh along with me,
Nobody to love.
Hated?
Perhaps, I don't really know.
© Copyright 2016 Chrysta. All rights reserved.
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deep. i like it!! drop comments on some of my dtuff. thanks!!
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Thank you for reading1 :D
I'd be glad to read some of your writing~
Awww this is so sad, and really well written. You can feel the emotions written here, you have talent there :)
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed my writing.:)
Fascinating. I loved how every now and then there was a line with a single word. It threw the flow off a little bit yet it worked. I felt as if it was a moment where I should stop and think about what was just said more.
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Thank you for your insight, I love that you thought deeper within and past just the words. Keep reading! Your critisism is valued!
Nice sad but nice, if that makes sense, just finished writting a poem that kinda don't make sense so i am still stuck in that sense of mind.
I really like this one.
JD
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Thanks. And yeah, i put alot of emotion into this.
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