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Submitted: June 23, 2011

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June 13th. That was the day they moved in, and the first time he caught my eye. Maybe, I should start off with my name, which is Sierra Jameson . I'm about medium height, brown eyes, a brunette. I'm a 17 year old junior at Yorkville High. Not the greatest name of a high school, trust me I know. Well, enough about me, I need to tell you about him! I walked outside of my house to watch the moving trucks drive up to the house next door to mine. My mom told me a new family was moving in and that they had a couple of kids my age. What she left out though, was that it was a pair of gorgeous brothers! I pretended like I was going to get my mail, when I saw them hop out of a red BMW 5 Series. I felt like it was one of those cheesy movies where they get out real slow and wind comes out of nowhere. So while I was walking back into my house I made the mistake of still looking at them. Then came my horrific tragedy. I tripped on the first stair of my front patio.

Great, they probably think I'm some stupid klutz. To my surprise, one of the brothers ran over and tried to help me up. "Hey, are you okay? I saw that fall, must have been bad because your knee is bleeding." Mr. Gorgeous said. "Ow, uh yea I am bleeding" I always say the wrong things around a guy. “Here, let me help you inside”.  He picked me up in both his arms like he was cradling a baby. He made it seem as if I was as light as a feather. He opened the door and put me on the couch. “Do you have band-aids around here?"  "Yea, they're in the, uhm, bathroom, down the hall to your left."
 He soon came back with a pair of Dora band-aids and some peroxide. "Well, these are sure cute." he joked. "Huh, yea" was all I could manage to say. He started to pour the peroxide on a cotton ball. Then tried to come near me, I started backing away. "Are you afraid of peroxide?" he chuckled. "No. I'm afraid of the burn peroxide causes!" He laughed; it was deep and a contagious laugh, so I laughed with him. "Hey, it's not that funny, that stuff really does burn." I contorted. "Yea, but it's not that bad, just picture yourself eating ice cream or doing something besides having peroxide rubbed on your leg." he replied kindly. "Is that what you do? Pretend that you’re at the beach or something?" I half joked; I really did want to know his answer. "No, I tell that to my little cousins all the time, ya know for when they get cuts and all."
He started to come toward my knee again with the cotton ball, and this time I didn't back away. I was looking directly into his emerald green eyes when he said “My name is Zach Field, and the guy out there is my twin brother Michael." I was astonished because they didn't look like twins. I mean there was a resemblance, and they were both good-looking, but they did not look like they were twins. "Wow, really because I didn't see the resemblance." "Yea it's because were fraternal twins. We get that a lot." laughed Zach.
 

So this was just a snippet(:

I don't know if I should turn this into a novel or what to do?

Leave comments, criticism is needed! Any adviced it taken.

So thanks for reading. Oh & if you have any stories you want me to

read just let me know. Kay, thanks!


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